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I really like this poem! I think it faces a topic that a lot of people can identify with and that makes it more appealing to a broader audience. Something ...

Hello there! I really enjoyed this poem, it was attractive since it's truly a unique poem. Just a few notes, though. The poem reads very oddly. Instead of being smooth ...

Hey there! 221B here to give you a review. I really like this poem, it's unique in the way that it focuses on both the wants and the possessions. Mostly ...

What a cute story! I really enjoyed reading this! For the most part, I think your story is fine, I did notice that you have a lot of very, very ...

Hello there! I've just read this chapter, I haven't read any of your others, but I have to admit it was a fairly confusing piece to read. You have several ...

Wow! This is a really intriguing beginning! I really love this. I did notice a few little things, several sentence fragments, but other than that there isn't too much that ...

This is coming along very well! I truly don't mind this story, though it is a bit dry. Something I noticed was that you use a lot of dialogue. That's ...

This is a very cute and unique poem! I really liked the theme of this poem. ^^ I do have a few notes, though. Punctuation is a must for a ...

Hello again! Once again you have written a beautiful piece of poetry. From what I see this poem is pretty well off, you're periods and commas are accounted for, you've ...

This is an interesting piece, but it seems out of place, like you took part of the actual prologue and put it up. Firstly, you need to pay attention to ...

I like this poem, it is very easy to connect with. I did notice a few places where your tenses were mixed up though. For example "I'll be a bird ...

This is a lovely little poem you have here! :3 I will say that the rhyming does sound very forced, though. Not all poems have to rhyme, if you feel ...

This poem is more accurate than I care to admit. It really brings to light all of the things that the current generation prefers to push into the shadows or ...

Even as someone who is not very religious, this has a huge impact. Your poem is very unique in the way that it allows room for God to be a ...

What a lovely poem! I really did enjoy this. The only notes I have are to do with the ending words of each line. The repetition of certain lines through ...