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I have been waiting to read this book for ages! And now the sequel's out so I have to read that one first before I read the other one! *starts ...

Hey, Ashley. I decided to come check out your new story. I am pumped! :D Note: Some of the corrections are just ones that sound better to me, but feel ...

Hey, Ash! I'm glad you're still going strong. How's it down in Tennessee? Is it humid? It is here; it's disgusting. :P Okay, I agree that this is a rocky ...

Hey Ash! I had to check this out, since you don't write poetry often! :lol: Droplets of dew fall freely (This confused me at first, because you said dew instead ...

Hi, ofir! I'm Sunny, and I shall be reviewing this for you today. :) I haven't read the other chapters, but I thought I'd look at this anyway. chapter 6- ...

Hey, Sparkle. I'm back again to review! :) So after reading this through, I think you ought to read this: It's on punctuation with dialogue. Look through this chapter and ...

Hi, Ash! Yay, another chapter! Who-hoo! “Sophia?” I nearly leaped out of my skin when I heard my name, clutching at my chest, wide-eyed . Michael, the orator, gave me ...

Hi, sparkle8744! I'm Sunny, and I shall do a review for you this evening. (At least, it's evening where I am, but I don't know what time it is to ...

Hi, Ash. :D It's been a while, but I'm so glad you're shooting these chapters out so fast. Keep it up! :wink: I was deep within the maze-like forest before ...

ANCIENTS: The Odyssey = minor death. I'm doing that book for a school project - I love it. It is a bit hard to understand, but that's because it's really ...

My favorite book in the trilogy was Inkdeath , mostly because it doesn't have a unhappy ending (when Inkheart and Inkspell did.) But also I liked it because Meggie gets ...

Hi, Ashley! Darn it, I'm always too late for a good in depth review. I should start working on my reviewing speed. :lol: I really liked this one. Having Ben ...

Hi, Lucy! :smt039 Wow, I can't believe you managed to write this being swamped with the contest. Anyway, I'm excited to read it! A fat droplet of water dripped onto ...

Hiya, Mars! I'm Sunny, and I'll be your reviewer today! :) First of all, I'd like to say that I like this piece very much, and if can remember to ...

Great job, Ninja! As for what Peanut and unicyclegurl1994 said, I guess it could be longer- :?: -but the specific style of the poem, like how haiku have a certain ...