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  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: I, Siberian Salt Reserves

    Hey, nice poem, I am always one for the shorts. And this is one short review. Stanza 1: The poem starts with a punch, likening the speaker's emotions to a ...

    Feb 10, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Science Fiction Re: it's only paranoia: Lyra (Purple)

    Poltergeist, back again with another story!? Must be my lucky day. Im gonna review using my custom-ish review template, with icons and format inspired by the great @R33SES , layered ...

    Feb 10, 2024
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: colors of the rainbow

    Hey, Polt, I find it only appropriate that I review this bold and unique poem with my custom, and first, template: R A I N B O W RED : ...

    Feb 9, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Realistic Re: "Candy" (Based on True Events) - Author's Note, Prologue, and Part One

    HELLO AALIYAH! T. BIRD here, since this is 2 parts (prologue and part 1) I will be doing 2 different reviews… I have alot of notes from the prologue alone... ...

    Feb 9, 2024
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: roses are red [just like the blood i spilt over you]

    Hey polt, today I will be reviewing this god-like poem, using my custom template: The Ink & Quill 𝒲𝒽𝒢𝓉 𝐼 π“‰π’½π“Έπ“Šπ“°π’½π“‰ At first glance, I was annoyed, because I like ...

    Feb 9, 2024
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: retroactive memory exercises

    Hey, mantra, I will be using my custom template to review this poem: The Ink & Quill 𝒲𝒽𝒢𝓉 𝐼 π“‰π’½π“Έπ“Šπ“°π’½π“‰ Yep, this is one heck of a ride, an out-of-body ...

    Feb 8, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Chapter I - Draft I

    Hey, omerhand , Trying Bird here, Im going to be using my custom review template: ℝ 𝕒 π•š π•Ÿ 𝕓 𝕠 𝕨 to review this chapter. RED : | Energy ...

    Feb 8, 2024
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Narrative Re: you are no longer the sun

    Hey, Avianwings , I will be reviewing your poem with my custom template: ℝ 𝕒 π•š π•Ÿ 𝕓 𝕠 𝕨 RED : | Energy I see no overall errors, since ...

    Feb 8, 2024
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Romantic Re: β˜…ε½‘[α΄€ α΄ α΄€α΄α΄˜ΙͺΚ€α΄‡κœ± ΚŸα΄α΄ α΄‡ - α΄„Κœα΄€α΄˜α΄›α΄‡Κ€ 1]ε½‘β˜… (Kinda bad)

    HEY PEEPS! Hello Afton (you are not related to William or Micheal are you...), Anyways, Hey, I am going to review this story using a template I made, so if ...

    Feb 7, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Before the Dragon - 2.1

    Note: This review has been deleted

    Feb 7, 2024
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: I told, I wanted, I wished.

    First review and I have to say, you did extremely well on this. It was well formatted, short enough to not bore me, and long enough that I didn't get ...

    Feb 7, 2024


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