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Re: I, Siberian Salt Reserves
Hey, nice poem, I am always one for the shorts. And this is one short review. Stanza 1: The poem starts with a punch, likening the speaker's emotions to a ...
Feb 10, 2024 -
Re: it's only paranoia: Lyra (Purple)
Poltergeist, back again with another story!? Must be my lucky day. Im gonna review using my custom-ish review template, with icons and format inspired by the great @R33SES , layered ...
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Re: colors of the rainbow
Hey, Polt, I find it only appropriate that I review this bold and unique poem with my custom, and first, template: R A I N B O W RED : ...
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Re: "Candy" (Based on True Events) - Author's Note, Prologue, and Part One
HELLO AALIYAH! T. BIRD here, since this is 2 parts (prologue and part 1) I will be doing 2 different reviews⦠I have alot of notes from the prologue alone... ...
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Re: roses are red [just like the blood i spilt over you]
Hey polt, today I will be reviewing this god-like poem, using my custom template: The Ink & Quill π²π½πΆπ πΌ ππ½πΈππ°π½π At first glance, I was annoyed, because I like ...
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Re: retroactive memory exercises
Hey, mantra, I will be using my custom template to review this poem: The Ink & Quill π²π½πΆπ πΌ ππ½πΈππ°π½π Yep, this is one heck of a ride, an out-of-body ...
Feb 8, 2024 -
Re: Chapter I - Draft I
Hey, omerhand , Trying Bird here, Im going to be using my custom review template: β π π π π π π¨ to review this chapter. RED : | Energy ...
Feb 8, 2024 -
Re: you are no longer the sun
Hey, Avianwings , I will be reviewing your poem with my custom template: β π π π π π π¨ RED : | Energy I see no overall errors, since ...
Feb 8, 2024 -
Re: β
彑[α΄ α΄ α΄α΄α΄ΙͺΚα΄κ± Κα΄α΄ α΄ - α΄Κα΄α΄α΄α΄Κ 1]彑β
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HEY PEEPS! Hello Afton (you are not related to William or Micheal are you...), Anyways, Hey, I am going to review this story using a template I made, so if ...
Feb 7, 2024 -
Re: Before the Dragon - 2.1
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Feb 7, 2024 -
Re: I told, I wanted, I wished.
First review and I have to say, you did extremely well on this. It was well formatted, short enough to not bore me, and long enough that I didn't get ...
Feb 7, 2024
