100xstupid

As an inspiring future teacher, I really felt this. Your speech is wonderfully eloquent and, although your sentencing is a little confusing at some times, you portray your message with ...

This is a beautiful and thoughtful poem; this is the first piece I've read of yours and you're clearly a talented poet. Your language is easy to follow but creative ...

I loved that story, you're very talented! Your language is fantastic, especially in the first paragraph. I've never been in a carluccios that sounded so entrancing, so that was very ...

I have a few things to say about this, but not many. The reason I don't have much to say is that I didn't understand what was going on at ...

Hiya, I'm stupid, and I'm gonna go through and nitpick a little, then give you my overall impressions of your story. "Weak stupid critter, that's what Joyce said" The punctuation ...

This piece is rather long, so I'm gonna mix it up a little and got through section by section for the whole story. The first paragraph sets the tone well, ...

Hey there! I'm gonna give you a review, which may take a little while as this is rather long. I'm gonna give my general thought and impressions after I nitpick ...

At one point I thought I was offended... but then I was laughing. I'm not even sure how to go about reviewing this strange and wonderful story. It was an ...

Hi there, I'm just gonna go through and nitpick a few little things before I get into the meat of the review. "I am running, running through a field of ...

As the others have mentioned, you have a good writing style and your flow and sentencing are good. You have a good grasp of language as well, though I wont ...

Hi there, I'm Stupid and I will be reviewing your story today from the perspective of an ex-pokemon master. I'll go through first and point out your spelling/grammar mistakes, of ...

Hi, I'm Stupid and I'll be reviewing you today. I love the first stanza, it's witty and sweet. You don't feel the need to overstate yourself, which is good. The ...

Hi there, I'm Stupid and I'll be reviewing your poem tonight. I can see you've put some effort into your flow here, though I was impressed by your vocabulary. I ...

Hi there, I'm Stupid, and in exchange for your review of my story I'm gonna write a review, just for you. I'll nitpick my way through first, then read it ...

I enjoyed the first chapter of the Ballad, so I thought I'd review this bit as well. I'll go through for spelling and grammar first, then give my overall impression ...