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Hey, Redrum here for a quick review. First of all, I want to say that I love the concept you've created with the two columns and then ending it with ...

I give you a standing ovation for this poem. Everywhere you go, people are always comparing life to this and that using pointless metaphors to help imprint their ideas on ...

Hey, Supernb! Redrum here to give a review. First I would like to start by saying you have a great idea here. You gave a good description which helped set ...

Okay, first of all, I want to say that this had to be one of the best poems I've ever read. It was truely phenominal. You have real talent, and ...

First of all, I'd like to just say wow. This was incredible. Absolutely amazing. The imagry just blew me away. Quote: His hair, a dark and devilish plumage, swayed like ...

I love this poem! I definitely think you should post it on a sign or banner and use it as a protest. I don't recall any grammar errors, and it ...

First of all, I have to say I love the rhyme scheme here. I know from experience that it's a difficult one to follow through a whole poem. Quote: Let ...

Il ike the concept you have here, but I think it needs a little work. Before I go all Grammar Nazi and stuff and ramble on until you want to ...

I have to agree with Jaetwee. The rhyming was very off. Like, you were constantly rhyming one sound, and only a few stanzas had rhyme scheme going, which makes the ...

I loved this poem! It was short, sweet and simple, as well as to the point. I've never really liked the long, elaborate poems. The only thing I would change ...

Hey there! Great poem, just so you know. I couldn't find any corrections to make (I'm guessing Noelle found them all lol!) I can't put my finger on what I ...

Um, can anybody say "EPIC!" This poem was hysterical in a creepy kind of way. I know I chuckled more than once. Haha, "Please don't mind the Hitler 'stache" That ...

Not bad. Not bad at all. I couldn't find any grammar errors (I'm a grammar Nazi, sorry xD). All in all, it was a beautiful song that got the point ...

I have to agree with Maimoona. The first line makes no sense. These two lines don't make much sense either: Words take me bleeding out the wound Words take me ...

Well that was depressing, but I loved it nonetheless. There was a huge twist in the beginning. At first, I thought this was going to be a love poem, then ...