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Hey there! Welcome to YWS! This has good potential. but it needs a bit of revision. I'm gonna do some suggestions. You don't have to change it. Or maybe use ...

Hi there. I'm really sorry if this is going to seem harsh. This is actually... bad, in my opinion. it's empty. i couldn't feel what you felt. I couldn't see ...

Hey there! I liked this. I can relate easily to this. I agree with everything above. I don't have much more to say... I sit back down on the bathroom ...

oh, I was last to review. Again. i must check on updates more frequently. Anyway, i found something that might help you! So: “The pot calls the kettle black.” Nate ...

Hey there, Meep! :D Happy to see your still doing new projects. You know, your stories are always a nice read. it has a touch that makes it intresent. i've ...

Hi there! I'm Kat and I'm gonna review this... not sure if it will help, since it's SO short, I can't say much. I would rather fly with the birds ...

Hi Meep! I'm the first one reviewing... ha ha :D hum... simply loved it. I read it twice, but I always get to much absorbed in the story I don't ...

Ahhhh!!!! I meant ha ha ha ha ! *laughs insanely, just like you* The end was the best part! Completely hilarious! All points noticed by me are already pointed out... ...

he he... this one really caught me! So funny!!!! :D Again, nothing to say... -_-' You'd be surprised with my self-esteem... either as a writer or a person... LOL I ...

Hey there! Not much too say, but I feel the need of commenting on every chapter... I think a good review will always help a writer to write. At least ...

Hi there Meep! I'm a bit late on the reviews, I've been busy :D Awesome chapter! OMG, I'm completely loving the story! It's completely hilarious and also real. You know ...

Hi there! I really liked this! Everyone else has pointed out the points in need of revision, so i have nothing else to say... Just wanted to leave my opinion ...

Hey there! Happy new year! :D Ok, so on to the review! The points I wanted to stand out, are already stood out... I don't have much too say. This ...

Hi there! I'm Kat, and I'm gonna review this since everyone else were rude enough to not say anything. I think this is cute! :D Too short... it's like one ...

Hi Meep! Everyone has said what I thought so, again, I won't be much of a help! I still reply to tell you I really like this! It's a good ...