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Re: Adour
Hi there Mystique Eyes! Welcome to YWS! I'm Kat and I absolutely love your name and avatar :D I was looking for a poem that could be my hundredth review! ...
Jan 22, 2009 -
Re: Shine Bright, Little Baby
hey anti-pop! As you gave me this to review, I will! :D I have not much too say. this is incredibly beautiful. I get this feeling 'cause I have a ...
Jan 22, 2009 -
Re: Moonlite Beach
Hey there! I'm Kat and I'm gonna review this for you. First, really short. It's a good topic, you could develop it more. Good word choice. I suggest on the ...
Jan 22, 2009 -
Re: long lasting pain .
Hey ghostskinsx! Welcome to YWS! First, your avatar rocks! Really like the picture. Here on YWS we have a 2:1 policy. It means before you post anything, you have to ...
Jan 19, 2009 -
Re: Saving all the rest...
Hey there! I'm Kat and I'm gonna review this for you! But first of all, welcome to YWS! On to the review! This is a bit vague. And short. it's ...
Jan 19, 2009 -
Re: Blood
Hey there! I'm Kat and I'm gonna review this amazingly depressing poem! :D So, as I have said above it's depressing (obviously). But a lot of people here (including myself) ...
Jan 19, 2009 -
Re: Just Forget
Hey there! I'm gonna review this. First, I think it's really sweet to write a poem to your mother (even if it's begging to let you alone :D). This seems ...
Jan 19, 2009 -
Re: Crashed and burned
Hey there Rachie! here's your friend Kate to review this first poem. :D Don't think of this as a harsh review plz! I'm only saying it for your own good. ...
Jan 19, 2009 -
Re: A Memoir
Hi there! I'm Kat and I'm gonna review this for you (over all). this is really good. You expressed an ordinary matter in such an unique way. The words are ...
Jan 18, 2009 -
Re: Meep wants her money back to buy a Cheeseburger!
Ha ha! Meep you should get impulses more often! I love reading your hilarious scripts! Meyer's character was completely hilarious! And yours as well! :D Gold star to Meep!
Jan 18, 2009 -
Re: New Moon Parody
that was freaking funny! You had me laughing through it all! this was awesome! Favorite part: EDWARD: Ya, well… Look Bella, I’ve been thinking. You know, with me being a ...
Jan 18, 2009 -
Re: Blind - Chapter 16
OMG! I'm really sorry for her... she doesn't know what she got herself into. great chapter. You're hilarious. You had me laughing through this one. Hum, i didn't knew that ...
Jan 18, 2009 -
Re: Be Free
hum... seriously? no one got what it was about? i saw it coming from the third stanza. In the end, she gives in to death right? At least that was ...
Jan 18, 2009 -
Re: Memory
*sniff* that was the most sad, true, and real poem I have ever read from a 13 year old boy. First of all, welcome to YWS! You will have much ...
Jan 17, 2009 -
Re: Where is the world going?
Hi there! This is good, really good. It's real. Down to earth. I could see everything you were trying to describe. The rhymes were pretty good. Are your hero You ...
Jan 17, 2009
