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Hey this is no poetry. First you should put it in poetry structucture which means stanzas and all. Second you're vocabulary should be spelled out correctly, live in stead of ...

Hey there! Kat's here for a review! :D Welcome aboard to YWS! So first of all, here on YWS we have a 2:1 policy. It means that you should do ...

Hey there, anti-pop! Here's Kat to do a crappy review, because I have not much to say except the things already mentioned. Incredible, I found this good. I did not ...

Hey there Meep! YUPI! I'm second on the reviews. i think were battling to see who reviews first... that's awesome for you! LOL instead of my usual empty review i ...

Hey there, my mystique eyes! Kat's here for a review! So, this is good. I liked it. there are some mistakes. You keep using "your" as "you're". Like: When your ...

Hey there justme! Kat's here to review! Welcome to YWS! Since you're new, you probably don't know, but here we have a 2:1 policy. That means that you have to ...

This is incredible realistic! I like playing the Sims even if my favorite part is to construct the house, but i still like it. but it's way too frustrating! An ...

Hey there Just_Listen! Kat's here and I'm gonna review this for you. First, welcome to YWS! you'll have great joy here (or sadness, it depends if you're good or bad). ...

Hi there, Meep! Here's Kat. So as for your chapters, it's completely amazing that I love them so much and that I never have anything to say... I found absolutely ...

Hey there God! I'm an absolutely idiot to review since I have nothing else to say. All my thoughts were mentioned above. About the pucntuation, at least put a . ...

Hey there Vivacious! I'm Kat and I'm gonna review this for you. O.O You're eleven? And a junior already? God, I remember when I was eleven... Moving on. The review! ...

Hey there! I'm Kat, nice to meet you! I was gonna say welcome to YWS but it seems you're here for awhile behind, but still Welcome! On to the review! ...

Hey there! I'm Kat and I'm gonna review (obviously -_-')! This is pretty good. Believe me the title does not influence your readers to think of Twilight the books. I ...

Hey there! I'm Kat and I'm gonna review this for you! Oh, and welcome to YWS! I haven't read the first so I'll go on that on next :D On ...

Hey there! I'm Kat and I'm gonna review. There's not much too say... I mean, this is great! I love it. The concept is truly a good choice and it's ...