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Hi! Firstly, welcome to YWS, I hope this brilliant site helps you as much as it's helped me! Now, on to your story. For a first chapter I didn't find ...

Hey Bexy, coco here, thanks so much for the review request :D This was....heart-breaking. I honesly can't think of a better word. I haven't read anything here so thought-provoking and ...

Hey kendellelise! You requested a review so here I am. I have to say that I’m no expert on poetry, but here’s me having a go at reviewing one. :) ...

WOW! Lindsay, I kinda love you right now for asking me to review this because I absolutely loved it! I really have nothing to ask you to improve on because ...

As someone who lives approximately 2 minutes away from one of the worst hit areas in London you really hit the nail on the hammer with this. Reading your poem ...

I really enjoyed this poem. You create a wonderful visual experience with the earthy descriptions of the trees and the mountains and the soil and then a heavenly visual experience ...

Thanks for the review request. Hope this helps “I’m not going! You can’t make me!” Elaine’s protests echoed in the tiny room we were ushered into the day before. My ...

I think its okay so far, just your basic prologue, I'm not sure where you can take it from there because the possibilities are endless really depending on the genre ...

Hello, welcome to YWS! I'm coco and I shall be your first reviewer :D My husband lay on the bed, tightly [I think this is the wrong word - maybe ...

Hey Emmylou! I thought I'd stop by and give you a review. I hope this helps! The fire had completely burnt out during the night. - This sentence would've been ...

Wowzers! I'm glad seaminglymeaningless told me to read this because it's just the kind of genre I like, dark, gritty and well-narrated. Kudos to you CJ! Apart from an 'I' ...

Hey, Kyou! I liked the beginning of this, it set out the story pretty well but if I'm honest you lost me in the last two paragraphs. You went into ...

Hiya, Elite! Coco here :D I really loved this. The descriptions were vivid, your writing was intriguing and I'm excited to read more. My only qualm with this piece is ...

Hiya, Solvalery! A million and one apologies for the late review, you caught me just a few days before I went on holiday. Anyway, I'm back now and I hope ...

Hey, Proseithion! Coco here as requested! I don't normally do Sci-fi but I had a look at this and...well...I loved it! I was so engrossed in the story that I ...