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LaceyDreadth
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Thu Nov 11, 2010 10:25 pm
LaceyDreadth says... · Thu Nov 11, 2010 10:25 pm
Hi there, I'm Lacey and I want to review your work! I really mean it, like, really.

I haven't reviewed enough to tell you what I'm especially good at, but I'm ready and willing. Right now my review count is very...barely existent and I want to change that so I can help the lovely writers on this website. Right now, as it is the holiday season in retail and I happen to be a cashier, I am a bit harrowed for time, so I can't review novels/novellas properly. Once everyone stops wanting to shop all at once, I'll edit that part and will be happy to review them, but I cannot right now.

What I will review:

Poetry:
All

Fiction:
Adventure (short stories)
General (short stories)
Romance (short stories)
Fantasy (short stories)

My reviews so far. Right now, they're only poetry, but I want to change that, with your help!
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http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post783684.html#p783684

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Sins
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Thu Nov 11, 2010 11:15 pm
Sins says... · Thu Nov 11, 2010 11:15 pm
Heya :)

Would you remind reviewing a short story for me, Lacey? A bit of a break from poetry. xD

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Please and thank you!
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LadySpark
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Sun Nov 14, 2010 2:39 pm
LadySpark says... · Sun Nov 14, 2010 2:39 pm
will you please review
my short story Fatal love
here are the links:

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?t=71430 < fatal love


PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!

I will review in return since I'm low on points
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Jashael
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Sun Nov 14, 2010 3:21 pm
Jashael says... · Sun Nov 14, 2010 3:21 pm
would you please check out my portfolio? have a bunch of poetry! XD
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MiaParamore
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Mon Nov 15, 2010 3:04 pm
MiaParamore says... · Mon Nov 15, 2010 3:04 pm
Hey there, would you mind giving a review on this?..it's kind of urgent, so it'd be great if you could review it soon, but no pressure, you could turn it down, of course.

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Threnody
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Mon Nov 15, 2010 11:18 pm
Threnody says... · Mon Nov 15, 2010 11:18 pm
Hey!!

You wouldn't mind reviewing one more poem? :D

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Thanks!!

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DreamyAlice
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Fri Jun 23, 2023 5:53 am
DreamyAlice says... · Fri Jun 23, 2023 5:53 am
Hello, I am one of the res crew mods here on YWS. This is a message just to inform you that I will lock and archive this thread as it is not active anymore. We have to archive and lock the inactive threads to keep the forum organized so no worries if you'd like to reopen it at any point in the future please contact a current resources moderator, we would be happy to reopen it for you ^-^

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