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lilymoore
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Tue Dec 01, 2009 1:01 pm
lilymoore says... · Tue Dec 01, 2009 1:01 pm
I took a break off of Reviewing to participate in NaNoWriMo. But now I'm back and I have some major reviewing to do. I mostly like to review Romantic Fiction, Fantasy Fiction, Science Fiction, Other Fiction, and Art. But I'm also willing to take a stab at any of the stuff in the Poetry forums as well as Scripts, Lyrics, Historical Fiction and Miscellaneous. The only things I don't like are Action/Adventure and Non-Fiction.

All I need is...
A Link
The Genre
And Word Count

Oh, and usually I can get a review done within a day so yeah.
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anima9
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Tue Dec 01, 2009 2:04 pm
anima9 says... · Tue Dec 01, 2009 2:04 pm
A short poem

topic55101.html
Lyric Poetry
170 words


Please, oh please! if you have the time, please review the first parts of my first novel!

Prologue

topic54545.html
Romantic Fiction
591

Chapter 1

Part 1
topic54772.html

Part 2
topic54920.html

Romantic Fiction
Total word count is 5606

Thank you so much! :)
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lilymoore
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Wed Dec 02, 2009 2:44 am
lilymoore says... · Wed Dec 02, 2009 2:44 am
Done to the power of 4. Come on peoples!!! Hit me!!!
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Young gun
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Wed Dec 02, 2009 6:06 pm
Young gun says... · Wed Dec 02, 2009 6:06 pm
I would not mind some more reviews on this one:

topic51881.html

Romantic Fiction.

Around <500 words I suppose.
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lilymoore
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Thu Dec 03, 2009 7:48 pm
lilymoore says... · Thu Dec 03, 2009 7:48 pm
Doneskies. Anyone else?
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Moriah Leila
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Tue Dec 08, 2009 5:20 pm
Moriah Leila says... · Tue Dec 08, 2009 5:20 pm
Hey, I'd love a review on my novel, The Dark Goddess. Currently, I have eight chapters posted, but here is the link to the first chapter. If you have a chance, feel free to review the others.

The genre is Fantasy-fiction, although it is a little action/adventure so hopefully that isn't a problem. If it is just let me know.

And the word count is: 2,496
I am not addicted to reading, I can quit as soon as I finish one more chapter.




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anima9
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Thu Dec 10, 2009 12:26 am
anima9 says... · Thu Dec 10, 2009 12:26 am
Oh please! I need your time and patience. Please review my chapter 2!

A Little Fantasy Chapter 2: Never Forgotten
Romantic Fiction
topic55391.html
Word Count = 1807

I will be grateful to your generous and kind efforts.
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Young gun
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Fri Dec 11, 2009 5:33 pm
Young gun says... · Fri Dec 11, 2009 5:33 pm
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Thanks
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Jiggity
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Mon Dec 14, 2009 1:53 am
Jiggity says... · Mon Dec 14, 2009 1:53 am
I can haz review, plz?

Maharaj the Magician is YA (Young Adult) couldn't really pick a genre to be honest...It's....wierd. It's about 2500 words as is.
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lilymoore
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Fri Dec 25, 2009 11:25 pm
lilymoore says... · Fri Dec 25, 2009 11:25 pm
Anyone else...now that I finally stopped forgetting about my WRFF thread. *head/desk* Bad lily. Baaad!
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OxfordandOnyx
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Sat Dec 26, 2009 1:20 am
OxfordandOnyx says... · Sat Dec 26, 2009 1:20 am
I hope you don't mind. It's a poem (rated 16+), and I would appreciate all the help I can get with it-- thanks. :)

Word count is 207
Genre: Other

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic56004.html
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Sun Dec 27, 2009 1:45 am
lilymoore says... · Sun Dec 27, 2009 1:45 am
Anyone else? hmmm
There may even be a special surprise involved.
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Angels-Symphony
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Tue Dec 29, 2009 7:15 am
Angels-Symphony says... · Tue Dec 29, 2009 7:15 am
lilymoore wrote:Anyone else? hmmm
There may even be a special surprise involved.


Really? *___* I love special surprises.

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic56191.html

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic56193.html

Thank you <3

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lilymoore
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Wed Dec 30, 2009 5:42 am
lilymoore says... · Wed Dec 30, 2009 5:42 am
And done...well, I'm working on Shina's special surprise, but it's a surprise, so we're not going to keep talking about that.

teehee
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