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Since she can't take anything with her when she goes, I've decided that this will be my older siste…Sun Jul 03, 2005 10:12 pm -
Your face. It used to be flushed and pink. It used to mimic with pure joy. Your cold now - from the…Sun Jul 03, 2005 1:17 am -
I wrote this when I was ten. I hope you enjoy it! Piggy's Restaurant The place that hogs go wild fo…Sat Jul 02, 2005 9:15 pm -
My best work comes out in realistic fiction/school stories, so crit hars I wanna make this one work…Sat Jul 02, 2005 4:56 pm -
a short little writing exercise... Solo Qui (Only Here) The man on your right shoulder bares his wi…Sat Jul 02, 2005 5:39 am -
I haven't read any of the other Hourglass stories (I checked out your portfolio... you have loads o…Wed Jun 29, 2005 3:33 am -
For every moment of every day I have questioned what death tastes like. I close my eyes, envision t…Tue Jun 28, 2005 7:12 pm -
As soon as I open my eyes, I dash to my desk, rummaging though the homework worksheet and old post-…Tue Jun 28, 2005 2:48 pm -
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This isn't exactly a short story. More like Chapter One to a very big book. This happens to be the …Sat Jun 25, 2005 6:42 am -
This is an awkward piece of fiction I wrote at...*gasp* 1:00 in the morning. I don't expect good re…Sat Jun 25, 2005 12:00 am -
Sam, you are writing this in more like a poem then a story, its mostly just imagry and metaphors no…Thu Jun 23, 2005 12:46 am -
This is great! I like how the stuff he's writing kind of mixes with what's happening around him. Un…Tue Jun 21, 2005 5:31 am -
is the truth really a truth or is it a covered up lie.Every one around you is smirking and you dont…Sat Jun 18, 2005 6:36 am -
The scene was just right for tragedy. On the park bench I watched them play in bright cartoon shirt…Fri Jun 17, 2005 8:48 am -
Mummy and Daddy have gone to war. Things will never bo the same again. Pushing and pulling. Is it h…Thu Jun 16, 2005 9:00 am -
When I climbled the mountain that morning, it was cool, the mist hung in the air over the tiny cove…Wed Jun 15, 2005 11:13 pm -
Edited 4/5 - cut a few cuss words Sitting on the big brown couch that smells like pot and pee and s…Tue Jun 14, 2005 4:57 pm -
The window reflects my face, painting it over the dark nighttime rain as it pours down outside. My …Mon Jun 13, 2005 9:54 pm -
Clocks cry: stillness is a lie, my dear; The wheels revolve, the universe keeps running. (Proud you…Mon Jun 13, 2005 2:16 pm -
This is kind of the first story I acctually prepared before I wrote it. Anything you think needs fi…Mon Jun 13, 2005 1:39 am -
This is my story. Duh. anyway, it's supposed to be colonial US set, so yeah. It's about this kid, L…Sun Jun 12, 2005 3:03 am -
**Just felt like writing sumthing right now, so this is just off the top of my head.** **It's proba…Thu Jun 09, 2005 7:00 am -
"So here you are again?" Pretty slow thing to say to someone you've been waiting around for for ele…Tue Jun 07, 2005 1:30 pm -
I’m standing on the 24th floor of an office block, staring unemotionally into far-down neon lights …Mon Jun 06, 2005 3:06 pm -
This is a really creative, albiet a bit strange, piece. The finishing statement was haunting, just …Mon Jun 06, 2005 3:28 am -
I had to post something...this is FAR from final...tell me what you think. At dusk, I wander alone …Mon Jun 06, 2005 3:21 am -
I like the way you opened it up; it definitely grabbed my attention and made want to read more. You…Mon Jun 06, 2005 3:19 am -
I liked it. You write really well. I just didn't understand it that well, and in the second paragra…Mon Jun 06, 2005 3:17 am -
This is a cool beginning... where does it go from there?Mon Jun 06, 2005 3:14 am -
“If he was like, three inches taller, he could rest his chin in her cleavage.” Clara said while we …Sun Jun 05, 2005 1:38 am -
A steel mist filled the streets of Moscow in heavy swirls while a light snow was slowly beginning t…Sat Jun 04, 2005 4:51 am -
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Originally I had a title for this, but I hate it now...any ideas? Kayle Young stood by the panelled…Fri Jun 03, 2005 8:36 pm -
Sam lay on the bed. It was well past one in the morning. His only source of light bled from the tin…Fri Jun 03, 2005 2:49 pm -
The wheels of the old carriage dug deeply into the winding gravel road, sending into the sky a crus…Wed Jun 01, 2005 8:49 pm
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My feet trudged slowly down the beat path. One in front of the other, walking resignedly toward my …Wed Jun 01, 2005 8:26 pm -
There is no dialog in here, it varies between first and thrd, and may be slightly confusingm but be…Tue May 31, 2005 8:34 am -
"So what seems to be the problem?" He asked us as we entered the foyer. It trully made up for the d…Sun May 29, 2005 11:14 pm -
Some of you may have noticed a story called Birds of War posted on here before; however I decided t…Sat May 28, 2005 1:32 am -
I started writing this last night and my head was full of ideas and i was truly inspired for the fi…Fri May 27, 2005 3:11 pm -
this is a story I started for a friend, I don't know if I'm going to continue it but I would like s…Fri May 27, 2005 8:33 am -
“I’m so hungry,” I rasped. My voice was different, so different I didn’t recognize it. It was evil.…Wed May 25, 2005 10:46 pm -
This is where I last left off... A million emotions ran through Maria's head as she read the letter…Tue May 24, 2005 7:21 pm -
All I can say is that I hope you like it... heh... I’m in one of my moods again. I’m sitting here u…Tue May 24, 2005 3:11 pm -
Heres where I left off... "What do you mean by grave danger?" She asked in misunderstood voice. Vic…Mon May 23, 2005 7:22 pm -
Tell me if this belongs in a different section...:D Something weird I thought up earlier. *** At se…Mon May 23, 2005 4:13 am -
I'd stay with you forever, darling. I'd stay with you for as long as you want, but I'd only make yo…Sat May 21, 2005 10:52 pm -
Pinned to the ceiling like a butterfly on wax paper. Limbs bound tightly with leather, my eyes drip…Sat May 21, 2005 4:10 pm -
Hi, this is a story about a vampire named maria sanchez...some parts may be graphic at times and in…Fri May 20, 2005 9:28 pm
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