Hourglass (pretty short)

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This is a cool beginning... where does it go from there?
The robbed that smiles, steals something from the thief. ~William Shakespeare, Othello
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it's an add-on to an existing story... :wink:
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I like it, but i wanna know more about luke (is that his name?) and Liberty
you said it was an ad on to an other story, can i see the story?

~blue~ :D
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hold infinity in the palm of your hand and eternity in an hour. – William Blake

I was lying in bed, watching the stars and i thought, 'where the hell is the ceiling?' :wink:




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sure. just scroll back a couple posts...:D
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Hehe, nice... somebody got killed! I love it when people get killed because... it just adds a sudden.... death to intrest... nothing more to say... I'm the lazy lady.




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I love this!!! and I agree with TBR, when you pulled in death it gave it a cool twist.

P.S bluecows and Duskglimmer you can just look in her profolio too, for the past stories....




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Its good so far, man you have a better use of words than me! And your younger! I really need to start learning in English....




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omg...you're gonna keep me up all night reading this story sam....i agree, death is a neccessity in this story...continue the good work
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You shout 'cause you're just as far in as you'll ever be out
And these mistakes you've made, you'll just make them again
If you only try turning around."



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