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Something I wrote a while back. Thought I'd post here and see what people think Stop and Smile. I have but a sack on my back, And a branch for ...

Hello, everybody! This is my first submission..Umm... The first part, I suppose. Enjoy and critique, if you please! P.S. This is fanfiction in a way - it's a play version ...

Red Eyes Bleach Fan-Fiction By: Maki-Chan Chapter 1 Slain Dragon It was snowing in the forest outside of Karakura town. In the early morning. The snow already on the ground ...

Gideon stood still, hands on his knees, his chest heaving. It had been a long time since he had been so brutally active. He had been working out for the ...

I finally finished writing this for health class, despite how very much I tried to avoid it by floating around YWS (shame on me). But I’m a little nervous about ...

[pre]written for a contest. Maria is based on my music teacher and the name Regan is from Trixie Belden My hair blew in the wind. Oh how I hated that ...

Ride along little bobbin, don't even look up from your game. Don't you realize what you're missing? Don't you see the wonders outside your window? The trees seem endless, tall ...

Into the darkness I walk, Even in death I can hear you talk, Shadows left with memories, All become lost within the trees, Will I become forgotten, In my casket ...

Your lips touch mine One last time And I was ready to cry Ready to die So much pleasure it caused pain Will I ever feel like this again? I ...

To be truthfully honest What people say Does not matter anyway What you do Can only be judged by you And that is very true Its OK to be different ...

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Ahbout the release of Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows, and the tension and excitement readers felt. R&R, please! Quite old, so I know some one you will have lots ...

[pre]Day 2 Monday April 16 I’ve woken up in a strange place. I wasn’t quite sure where it was, only that it was light, it wasn’t Mrs. Bradford’s house, and ...

Hey guys! This is just a recently written extract from part of my novel. I just wondered what you thought of it. It won't make sense even if you have ...

(EDIT: I've decided this'd be best off locked. It was an April Fools joke only, and as such is no longer needed.) (Plz plz plz plz: I want reviews. The ...