Young Writers Society

Hi Once again

Can I request a review for the edited version of my above piece:
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic44939.html

But more importantly than that, can you review the first part of the first chapter of the same story? Here's the link: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic45220.html

Thanks so much!

I am done with all of the reviews and ready for more. Tomorrow, however, I am off. It is my anniversary, but I will be back on Wednesday to complete your review requests.

I am back and ready to do some rapid reviews. As always, I require no payment for reviews since I do receive points for each review I complete. Furthermore, I am online everyday for several hours so I can typically do a lot of reviews rather quickly. Please, give me something to do while I put off doing the dirty dishes!!

Hi Lisa,

Can you kindly review this for me:
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic45511.html

It's the second part of the first chapter of Dreams of Giants

Thanks so much!

Finally, I am caught up on reviews. I apologize for the delay, I have been moving the past two weeks...so crazy living out of boxes right now. I am ready for more stuff to review but beware, it might be 32 hours before I critique rather than 24.

Can you review Viruses Vs. Spysweepers?

I would love if you reviewed this story for me:

topic46174.html

Thanks!

Hey Lisa,

I'd be most grateful for a review on my next chapter of Dreams of Giants. Here's the link:
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic46223.html

Thanks so much!

Hi.

I know that there are quite many of them but they really need reviewing. (well not the first two but the three last one do.)

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic34323.html

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic35415.html

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic35811.html

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic35930.html

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic35938.html

The mansion: other fiction: ch 1 - 5

I won second place in your The Note Read...contest. Here are my 5 works for you to review. Hope you like them.

topic46560.html

topic46237.html

topic45861.html

topic46562.html

topic45873.html

Just wanted to let all of you know that it might take me some time to complete all of these reviews so please be patient with me. Emmylou, in order to post stories that need to be reviewed you have to go to that story and then copy the url. Paste the url here. A url looks something like this: topic43523-15.html. If you need help PM me

Hey there again,

When you get a chance, can you please do this for me?

topic46665.html

It's the next piece of Dreams of Giants.

Thanks so much

Have a great one!

I am mostly caught up on everyone's requests for reviews. Emmy I was able to critique both of your poems, but I was a little short on time so I will have to get to the stories tomorrow or Thursday. I apologize for the delay. As for everyone else, I am finished with your reviews. Hopefully I am living up to everyone's expectations.

Well, I'm not looking for a review as such, But could you please look at my blog? It's not a blog as such, but a story from which I post daily... you know, so i don't have to think about chapters, but can just write a diary for my character!
Well, I'm not looking for a review, just a small look at what I'm doing and what I could change! Could you please post your comments [they can be as short as you like] in the comments section of whatever post you look at? There are only 3 so far, so it shouldn't take you that long, and you don't even need to review! I don't mind if you take a few days/ a week though... That's sweet!
Oh, and I almost forgot! Here's the link to [my blog] 'Dear Diary'

Thank you so much!