Young Writers Society

Thanks for the suggestions, but its mostly about the girl and how she has to deal with the loss. :|

This is based on quantum physics principles with mine thrown in there. I know it may look long, but I promise it's worth the read.

CARB SUR NOT ALLOWED TO JOIN. JKILY SPREAD THE WORD.

I is sowwy, ddman. I post non-story in here. Alright. Oh, and if you saw, Captain Raines's death was an assassination by one of my Guardians.

This was really really cool. you had me from the first stanza, and I simply adored the mood you set. It was so mysterious and thought provoking. I mean, I ...

harsh and kind of groos and dark. It lacked structure in the way of formatting a poem and when you say "on that day of judgment day" couldn't you just ...

Congrats Aley! :D

This is a pretty accurate description of how it feels when I read. good job. I really like the part with the television and how your house is drowning when ...

By: PumpkinCat

Hello Persy, Pumpkincat here with your review of "a carnivorous island". First off I really liked this poem it kinda had a home comfort to it. I can really relate ...

I know, right! I just thought it would be a good source of conflict in there, and it makes sense seeing that all the kingdoms have been warring. So the ...

Hi Kimberley and welcome to YWS! Overall, I think this is a good piece with some lovely imagery. Just some small comments on wording. Lying dormant with it's sleepy memories, ...

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I'm with my good friend mindblown. We read the Raven by edgar Allen Poe. I assume that's what you based it on. Granted a smidge creepy but that helps me ...

My kitty once I get around to posting her *Is in deep plotting with a dead guy*

I didn't think it was too cliche. Parts of it were, you just have to find those parts and fix them, but sometimes cliche is good. it gives people a ...