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  • Welcome to YWS!

    We are an online community for young writers ages 13+.
  • Featured Member

    Aley is our featured member!


  • Forums » Lounge, The
    Title help. :)

    Thanks for the suggestions, but its mostly about the girl and how she has to deal with the loss. :|

    deliroast
    deliroast - 7 minutes ago

  • Short Story » Dramatic, General
    A Small Black Marble in a Sea of Glass

    This is based on quantum physics principles with mine thrown in there. I know it may look long, but I promise it's worth the read.

    fortis
    fortis - 12 minutes ago
    E - Everyone

  • Storyboooks » Specific Storybook Discussion
    The Castaways DT

    CARB SUR NOT ALLOWED TO JOIN. JKILY SPREAD THE WORD.

    Ignorance
    Ignorance - 20 minutes ago

  • Storyboooks » Specific Storybook Discussion
    'Armies of the Gods'-DT

    I is sowwy, ddman. I post non-story in here. Alright. Oh, and if you saw, Captain Raines's death was an assassination by one of my Guardians.

    ddman18
    ddman18 - 33 minutes ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic
    Judgement

    This was really really cool. you had me from the first stanza, and I simply adored the mood you set. It was so mysterious and thought provoking. I mean, I ...

    fortis
    fortis - 35 minutes ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic
    Judgement

    harsh and kind of groos and dark. It lacked structure in the way of formatting a poem and when you say "on that day of judgment day" couldn't you just ...

    speakerskat
    speakerskat - 35 minutes ago

  • Forums » Lounge, The
    Our Featured Member: Aley

    Congrats Aley! :D

    SoundsOfLife
    SoundsOfLife - 36 minutes ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » General, General
    a carnivorous island

    This is a pretty accurate description of how it feels when I read. good job. I really like the part with the television and how your house is drowning when ...

    fortis
    fortis - 41 minutes ago

  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic
    Judgement

    By: PumpkinCat

    PumpkinCat
    PumpkinCat - 43 minutes ago
    E - Everyone

  • Reviews » Poetry » General, General
    a carnivorous island

    Hello Persy, Pumpkincat here with your review of "a carnivorous island". First off I really liked this poem it kinda had a home comfort to it. I can really relate ...

    PumpkinCat
    PumpkinCat - 45 minutes ago

  • Storyboooks » Specific Storybook Discussion
    Arranged Marriages (second try...) DT

    I know, right! I just thought it would be a good source of conflict in there, and it makes sense seeing that all the kingdoms have been warring. So the ...

    fictionfanatic
    fictionfanatic - 47 minutes ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Lyrical, Realistic
    Smoke, Wind and Conifers

    Hi Kimberley and welcome to YWS! Overall, I think this is a good piece with some lovely imagery. Just some small comments on wording. Lying dormant with it's sleepy memories, ...

    niteowl
    niteowl - 47 minutes ago

  • Poetry » General, General
    a carnivorous island

    ~

    Persy
    Persy - 53 minutes ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic
    Ode to a Raven's Call

    I'm with my good friend mindblown. We read the Raven by edgar Allen Poe. I assume that's what you based it on. Granted a smidge creepy but that helps me ...

    speakerskat
    speakerskat - 56 minutes ago

  • Storyboooks » Specific Storybook Discussion
    Wonderland Rift 2 DT

    My kitty once I get around to posting her *Is in deep plotting with a dead guy*

    Aquestioning
    Aquestioning - 57 minutes ago

  • Reviews » Lyrics » Dramatic, General
    Down the Lonely Road

    I didn't think it was too cliche. Parts of it were, you just have to find those parts and fix them, but sometimes cliche is good. it gives people a ...

    fortis
    fortis - 1 hour ago