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The Literary Spotlight displays the five most popular new works over the past day as judged by the number of 'Likes' each has received in the past 24 hours.

Loneliness is not that bad
by shoaib in Poetry » General


Dead (Climbing Rhyme)
by Deanie in Poetry » Lyrical


Rainbows and Broken Dreams
by Hadj in Poetry » General


Why Pandas Are Perfect
by Sunset101 in Poetry » Other


Inquiry <Title Pending> - Prologue
by ShadowVyper in Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure



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  • Forums » Lounge, The
    Word War Winnerage

    Wordwar! April 20th 01:10 - :01:30 Aria: 314 Fortis: 280 Megsug: 479 Research and doodling have no place in battle. = . =

    Tenyo
    Tenyo - 3 minutes ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Other, General
    Why Pandas Are Perfect

    WHY DO I LOVE THIS SO MUCH!!!!? I mean it's so simple I could have written it when I was 7 but I just don't know!!! AWESOME! Okay sorry about ...

    speakerskat
    speakerskat - 5 minutes ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » General, Lyrical
    Rubber Bands

    Knight Dragon, here to review! Technical: Your first four lines are broken up in such a way that my mind hit mental potholes trying to get the flow down. I ...

    dragonfphoenix
    dragonfphoenix - 10 minutes ago

  • Storyboooks » Specific Storybook Discussion
    Fool's quest DT

    Awesome, can't wait! :)

    GriffinClaw
    GriffinClaw - 11 minutes ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Realistic
    Tarquin Syndrome- Chapter #9

    Hey Adam ^^ Oh, the wonders of bad teaching. By the sarcasm this line holds, I suggest ending this with an exclamation mark instead of a simple period. but they ...

    Iggy
    Iggy - 13 minutes ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Dramatic, General
    Theirs

    This was a quite a clever poem. I liked how each stanza began with every other line of the previous stanza. It added an alternative type of rhythm that I ...

    DeepCrystal
    DeepCrystal - 13 minutes ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » General, General
    Rainbows and Broken Dreams

    Well this was a rather depressing poem, at least I know what you are saying though which is good. I did love it despite how negative it is. I also ...

    speakerskat
    speakerskat - 14 minutes ago

  • Reviews » Short Story » Dramatic, Narrative
    Cotton Candy

    Knight Dragon, here to review! Technical: Iggy's already noted the "daddy" technicality, so I'm going to leave that alone. Such a shame, that two young lives could be ruined in ...

    dragonfphoenix
    dragonfphoenix - 20 minutes ago

  • Storyboooks » Specific Storybook Discussion
    The Bridge, DT

    AYE!

    Shadowlight
    Shadowlight - 20 minutes ago

  • Forums » Ask an Expert
    Writers who take too long to writer their works

    When I saw this topic, I was going to come in and say George R. R. Martin :P

    Spotswood
    Spotswood - 23 minutes ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » General, Lyrical
    Rubber Bands

    Hello Miles! I feel the sensation of a million tangled, rubber bands—intertwining, Unnecessary comma is unnecessary. Also, I think combining "intertwining" with the next line would flow better, ja?

    Iggy
    Iggy - 39 minutes ago

  • Forums » Writing Activities
    Starting A Writing Group (Come Join!)

    Hey guys, this thread has been dead awhile, so maybe you should start PMing/chatting with each other without without waiting for a reply from Ingrid since she doesn't often get ...

    Lucrezia
    Lucrezia - 48 minutes ago

  • Reviews » Short Story » Dramatic, Narrative
    Cotton Candy

    HELLO AGAIN. :) Quiiick nitpick: “Are you sure, daddy?” Daddy* always capitalize Mom(my)/Mum(my)/Dad(dy) unless they have your/his/her/my/etc. in front of it. Okay so wow. Here I thought this was

    Iggy
    Iggy - 53 minutes ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure
    Resurrection Ch. 1

    Hello there. :) A few quick nitpicks: where ten black pieces of notebook paper reside. Blank* you mean? It seems history must repeat. I feel like this is missing the ...

    Iggy
    Iggy - 1 hour ago

  • Storyboooks » Specific Storybook Discussion
    Malleus Maleficarum, DT

    x.x Crap, I still have to create my character. I will get it in by tonight then.

    Laure
    Laure - 1 hour ago

  • Short Story » Dramatic, Narrative
    Cotton Candy

    Funny, Sarah noted as she was hustled past the scene by the amusement park's employees, how somebody's life could be dissolved in a second, just like the cotton candy she was eating.

    cleverclogs
    cleverclogs - 1 hour ago