Here are some of my haikus. Will you please give me advice?!
#1
midsummer
the fresh wood scent
of the lumberyard
#2
mid afternoon
the scent of lilacs
hidden by a gray fence
#3
fresh snow
a new footprint
from a leather shoe
#4
Dance floor
a womans body
swings side to side
#5
Willow branch
covered in frost
retreating storm
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