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Chapter 2
Lanterns hung from shop windows giving the night an almost romantic gleam. Panatar gripped his horse's reigns as tightly as he had when he had first left the dock at midday. His hands were tired, but he would not admit this fact to his father. Besides, what good would it do? They wouldn't be able to stop until they reached Joriah's shop, anyway.
The sheet that Panatar had placed over his face to shield his eyes from dust had not worked as well as he'd hoped it would either. The small opening that he had left over his eyes was large enough for the dust being kicked up by his father's horse to get into his eyes. As a result, he was left with a pained expression on his face that his father might have seen if not for the cloth that concealed it.
Just when Panatar began to wonder whether or not his horse would make it to Joriah's shop, his father's horse stopped in the middle of the street. He yanked his horse's reigns, forcing it to come to an awkward halt. He let out a sigh of relief, and squinted through the darkness to try to orientate himself to his surroundings.
The shop immediately to his left had several lanterns hanging at its entrance. It was a small wooden building, and a sign hung above the door frame that read “Your Future is in Your Hands – The Most Accurate Palm Reading in Hyvria.” Panatar smirked. You had to be a real idiot to fall for such poor attempts at defrauding you out of your money. But few seemed to share his sentiments, because a short line of people waited in turn to get their fortunes told.
On his right hand side lay a shop that was far more gloomy, and gave off none of the pixie-fairy glow that the fortune telling stall emitted. The front window was shattered, and the sign above the door was painted in a simple black script. It read , “Joriah's Antiques”.
“Panatar,” a voice said, “we have no time. Tie your horse outside and meet me in the shop.”
“Yes, Father.”
He fastened his horse's reigns to a wooden bar that had begun to play host to a termite infestation, and followed his father inside. The shop's walls were lined with metal hooks upon which several old spades, tongs, and other heavy iron objects hung. Several mirrors also decorated the wall, one of which seemed to have recently been broken – broken fragments of glass lay on the floor.
The floor of the massive shop was lined with old wooden tables, chairs, and benches covered with metal artifacts that nobody in their right mind would buy. Of course, Panatar mused, nobody in the whole of Hyvria was in their right mind. He took a closer look at the nearest table, and noticed a bullet lying on its top. These people were really mad. Who would buy a single bullet?
At the back of the shop, was a wide counter broad enough to stretch from one wall to the other. Behind it, were hundreds of drawers. Panatar guessed that this was where Joriah kept all of his more touchy merchandise. It was no doubt the part of the shop that would contain the most interesting artifacts.
And then Panatar heard his father say, “Oh, Lord. He's dead. Panatar, Joriah's been shot.” Panatar looked over the counter to where his father stood. The sight of the shot placed perfectly between Joriah's eyes sent shivers down his spine.
“What does that mean?”
“It means that Galdiff's got his hands on the key,” his father said. “It also means that we've lost our strongest contact in the black market.”
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