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Really nice. You make more questions as fast as you answer them. The old man just keeps you wondering about who she is. It is amazing how quickly she has become attached to the dragon. The bond seems so much stronger then a simple love between pet and owner. Their is something that makes them closer. Thrilling
Just wondering about the use of the word siezure in this chapter. Did the old man have a heart attack, if he did then I think you need to find some way of putting this into the story because siezure doesn't seem correct. I mean I'm epileptic and I have loads of siezures but they haven't killed me - yet!
Also, is it wrong of me to now want a pet dragon for my birthday?
- apple96