Love making

by roxyask

Published March 3, 2012

In poems 1

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Seductive dress
Sexy suit
Quick kisses
Lists of wishes
Clothes falling
Wants growing
Bare skin
Bodies touching
Becoming one.
Loud gasps
Lustful thinking
Instincts reached
Bodies moving
Hands caressing
Love making.
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Sleeplessend
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Sleeplessend commented Comment · Oct 15, 2013

Short and simple process of the steps of love making. Liked that it was choronological as well. On a completely different humerous note the tone and pace of this poem made me think of the "days of christmas" carol. :p

Haha thanks :L

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alexiss
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alexiss commented Comment · Oct 15, 2013

I really enjoyed this. You have a great style of writing. It was short, but meaningful, you really hooked me in to it. I like it!

Thank you!!

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alexiss commented Comment · Oct 15, 2013

I really enjoyed this. You have a great style of writing. It was short, but meaningful, you really hooked me in to it. I like it!



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