Hello! I am going to write a review for your poem.
Your title, 'Self Image', really interested me into reading your poem. I hope you don't mind but may I be vulnerable with you right now? As a person that struggles with self image issues, I can relate to your poem a lot.
'My intestines barely fit inside this small coffin', in some way or another I can relate to this line especially because as a girl I feel like I'll never be comfortable in my own body, let alone my own skin.
'A brain that sits like a used sponge' is also relatable too sometimes feel like that too.
Also your poem is giving off the vibe of the song 'What was I made for' by Billie Eilish, which is actually pretty cool ho you made me think of that song.
Last but not least, I don't know know if you did this intentionally, but I like how you made the poem look like the figure of a body. That is actually pretty genius.
I really liked your poem overall. Thank you for this read!
Have a good day/night wherever you are!
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