Hey, demoncat! I'm here to review your poem.
I already had a strong idea of what the theme of the poem was going to be, but I was still pleasantly surprised when reading your piece! You had a nice transition between the benefits of being single and the downsides to it - all things that I noticed, too, now that I have people in my life who are dating. I really loved that juxtaposition; it's honestly one of my favorite parts of your poem.
I think my biggest piece of advice is to work on your grammar and spelling. You have an awesome start to a poem, but it just needs a little bit of polishing up. One of the biggest errors I noticed was that you spelled "no one" without a space in the middle of it. You also write "your" instead of "you're", so that's another thing you'll want to fix in any revisions you do. There's a couple of other ones scattered throughout the poem, but those are the two recurring ones.
If you ever are having trouble catching typos, I would suggest reading your works out loud before posting them. It forces you to slow down when you're reading, and helps you avoid accidentally skimming over something that has an easy fix.
But, overall, I really love your poem! It was cool seeing how you tackled the independence and longing that someone who's single feels.

Points: 74
Reviews: 509
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