Hey,I'm new to the reviewing thing but I will try my best.
Amazingly great. I noticed a lot of spelling errors like 'feinds' instead of friends,'jelous' instead of jealous. Well,maybe it was on purpose. I guess you love using malapropisms. It's great, if you know how to use it to make a difference. You can work more on that.
I like the way you express your emotions, though you hide a bit. Great work.
Points: 115
Reviews: 7
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