*This fanfic is underneath my folder titled “Dead boy detectives”. Gacha Club character designs are under this forum: https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?f=27&t=116005&start=1170. This is a fanfic of the Netflix show “Dead boy detectives”. It’s a very good show, I’d recommend it! But unfortunately, I don’t think it will ever get renewed for a second season. :< Anyway, I hope you enjoy and Happy Valoween!*
All that time, and Charles didn’t realize it. That feeling of complete trust and devotion, the fulfilling, growing feeling of…pure love.
Love for Edwin, the kind that extended beyond friendship, that brought the thrills and chills of the graveyard eternity.
For every day, he saw someone that he’d spend the afterlife with, someone to clasp hands with, someone who made him feel as though his heart were beating once again.
Crystal was sweet, but she didn’t fill the hole of loneliness and sorrow as deeply as Edwin did. That day when they hugged at the agency, that was the day Charles realized his truth, the day he could have sworn that his heart skipped a beat, even though it stopped many decades ago.
After all they had been through, after going through Hell and back, after running from Death so long, something became glaringly clear to him that day at the agency…
…Charles never wanted to let him go. Ever.
Not even death could keep them apart.
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Hey, baldassare here again for another review!
First off, YAOI!!!!!!!
Had to get that out of my system.
Anyways, this is really cute and sweet omg I love the MC already. I have no context on the source material but you might've just added another show to my "need to watch" list.
The repeated mention of how Edwin made him feel like his heart was beating again is so sweet! Especially where you mention that Edwin made him feel like his heart skipped a beat.
I love the closing too, I desperately need more of this story. Let me know if you write anything else, I'll def read it!
Happy review day!
I%u2019m glad you enjoyed this lol ^v^
Hello creeperfeverdreams!!!
Hop here with a review for Team Roses Of Red!!!! This review is super special for me!! It shall be my 100th review so woohoo!! Anyways, let's get on with this review, shall we??
Okay so this is a pretty short part so I am going to try and do the best I can!
Oh my god, this is so cute. Like, of course I don't know what's going on but I just absolutely love these little snippets of random scenes!!!
The last like
was amazing. like it reminded me of the saying till death do us part. It went like that but this exceeded that. Even after death, they still manage to be next to each other.
That is stupid cute!!! I love this and I need to see more oh my godddd!!!!
Have a good day/night!!!!!
Love,
Hop
hehe I am glad you liked this! ^v^