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Hey there! Guess I'm reviewing your review today.
So, I like your casual tone and the structure of this review. The detail is great and I'm sure if I was actually considering buying these I'd find it very helpful. I particularly appreciate how you recount how you've used it over the course of a day and your experience - too many reviews I find are from the product straight out of the box and are based largely on first impressions.
I think the main thing that made this difficult to read was the grammar, particularly the commas. You have a tendency to run a lot of sentences together with commas when they really should be separate. You also tend to not have commas in the middle of the sentence when joining smaller clauses. I would spend ages trying to explain comma rules (which I swear are overly complicated), but to be honest, these articles explain it better than I can.
I generally found this paragraph a little confusing. First off, I don't really understand why the cable length is halved because it's a 3.5mm cable, although that may just be because I'm not that familiar with headsets/headphones. This paragraph should also be at least three sentences, not one.
I was mostly confused by your last paragraph. Although I think a good bit of it is me not really being sure of the different types of jacks in high-end headsets and other headset stuff, it also is the most ramble-y with its run-on sentences, etc., which just made it hard to follow. Still, I like the comparison between the two different headsets and overall found the review very informative.
And that's all I've got today! Good luck, and keep writing.
3.5mm refers to the jack type, cheers for the review.
Heya, Tiggs! Casanova here to do a review for you! I'll be taking this paragraph by paragraph, so I hope you don't mind. Anyway, to the review of your review!
Now here you go through the standard procedure of listing what you know and how you feel about it, which is good. But I feel like you could give us more detail of what they're like for regular use- not just on the go. And also go into detail about bass and things like that- as a music operator I'm very concerned about how the bass sounds in that, and if they have a setting for that. I don't want my money going towards something without what I want, ya know? Anyway, onward.
This is a very good paragraph, and I like how you went into depth about the comfortability of them. That's always a concern-I don't want something that's gonna be itching at my ears for hours on end until I take them off. Anyway, onward.
I find you don't really go into all that much detail about the Steel version, and I found that rather amusing. You're focusing this review on Logitech, and although they are a good brand, they're over priced, at least here, and I would like to see more about the competition than what you have here. It seems your preferred ones are the logitech, which makes this review seem a bit biased in that area.
Anyway, I think your review could use some work and more explaining on the Steel's section, and I'm interested to see where this goes.
I think that's all I have on this one, and I hope it helped.
Keep on doing what you're doing, and keep on keeping on.
Sincerely, Matthew Casanova Aaron