VERSE ONE:
you got your
stick of dynamite
your ace up your sleeve
ready for a good fight
has no one told you yet?
someone spilled
someone told
and your stories are getting old
PRE CHORUS:
your last years news
we say your name and they say "who?"
CHORUS:
'cause the rain stains
on your face
everyone can see where you've been crying
and maybe they don't know it when your lying
too many excuses
the ties are coming loose and
everybodys on to you
VERSE TWO:
now i know you may be concerned
by the information that everyone's learned but you
i have to say
that i love that look on your face
it suits you well
PRE CHORUS + CHORUS
BRIDGE:
and everyone and everybody was on hold
to listen to you
and what do you do?
you take the minutes like prisoners
i hope you know the mistake you've made.
PRE CHORUS + CHORUS
LAST LINE:
you thought you've won the fight ...
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Wow, that was great! I love the chorus! I was actually singing along to it
It gives off good order...it was plenty great! Keep on writing,