"The Hallucinating Loner"

Hi, @Ken95! I'm here for a quick review.
I love this poem. It's a beautifully created piece of writing. I don't know whether it's imagination or real, but I truly enjoyed reading this. It has an intriguing title and a wonderful word to read. It's unique in its own way, very different from poems we usually find reading. It uses lots of examination points and it echoes a beautiful story full of fear and hallucinating. The plot is very interesting and the way you describe this situation is amazing. I loved reading this poem and would love to read more of your writings!

Keep on writing!

Best wishes,
Chris

hey! here for a review.

though i do not want to conclude that whether its your imagination or real life experiences, I certainly enjoyed reading the piece. Its something different from the usual poetry we read. The plot was really nice and the way you described the horrifying situation was interesting. The element 'sun' played an important role in the overall piece and it gives the perfect ending to the poem.

I do not want to comment about any shortcomings or some tips because I don't whether its a real experience that haunts or something else.
Overall, a very nice set. felt amazing to read it.

hope to read more of you.
stay awaken,keep writing.

Radrook here to offer some advice and general feedbac. Please note that I always try to be as tactful as possible. But if I offend you have my sincerest apologies. That having been said"

Thanks for sharing this poem expressing your feeling of being harassed by unseen forces. Since I am a Christian the only unseen forces that I am aware of that would find pleasure in harassing a human beringes are fallen angels or demons. However, before we jump to conclusions that what appear to be voices and other types odf sensory percoeptions are demons, we should take seriously into consideration that the human brain itself can cause a person to experience sense inmpressionssuch as noices, voices, touches, smells, tastes, without the aid of any outside stimulous.

In such cases medicaton can prove very useful.

Suggestions

Seek spiritual help via Church attendance
Seek medical help.

Hallucinations

What Causes Hallucinations?

Schizophrenia . More than 70% of people with this illness get visual hallucinations, and 60%-90% hear voices. But some may also smell and taste things that aren't there.

Parkinson's disease . Up to half of people who have this condition sometimes see things that aren't there.

Alzheimer's disease and other forms of dementia . They cause changes in the brain that can bring on hallucinations. It may be more likely to happen when your disease is more advanced.

https://www.webmd.com/brain/what-are-hallucinations#1