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The Yellow Hen Cafe

by Dracula


The Yellow Hen Cafe definitely has a cheerful atmosphere. If you're feeling down, I guarantee a visit to the family-owned business will drown out all your sorrows.

The building is a converted barn, its wooden slabs painted a dull-yellow with metal bumblebees scattered here and there. The window frames are painted bright yellow, with delicate lace curtains hanging from them. The door itself isn't even a door- just a security gate that closes during the night. But in the day, when the cafe is open, there's nothing separating the world outside with that within. All are welcome at the Yellow Hen, even the occasional sparrows who fly inside and settle on the plate of crumbs that’s kept by the entrance, next to the doggy bowl.

If you saw the floor, you'd notice it's a beautiful grey slate, but it’s hard to notice with all the round white tables upon it. There are matching chairs, but they are spread around the room in no real order. Guests are encouraged to drag and pull chairs to suit their needs- a table for ten is just as well catered for as a table for one.

Everyone gets a free slice of bread or a shortbread biscuit upon their arrival. There is no expectation of purchase. The friendly staff believe that the smiles produced are reward enough. Though if you should feel so inclined, you may drop any spare change in the honey jar at the counter. All donations go to keeping the farm behind the cafe running. They grow all their own food when possible, and anything else is purchased from local producers. The people of the Yellow Hen Cafe love supporting their community, and you'll always see their smiling chicken on the boards at local events.

When you walk towards the back of the barn, you'll see the collection of chooks (including roosters, hens and chicks) on the counter. There are porcelain, knitted, wooden and glass chickens- every kind you can imagine. Each day people are giving the business more to add to the display.

Behind the counter is a chalkboard that expands over the whole back wall. Between the drawings and humourous quotes you'll see the food menu. There's something for everyone (though the cafe keeps to a vegetarian theme), from pasties to quiches and soups to pasta. You must always stay for dessert too. The cake displays are by far the Yellow Hen's pride and joy. Each cupcake or slice is topped with a little paper hen, which always brings a smile to the children's faces. Coffee is served with their famous shortbread, and the iced-chocolates are known for the plethora of shaved chocolate on top.

Without a doubt, the Yellow Hen Cafe serves the yummiest food in the region. Though, honestly, I think people go there just to see the staff. The front-room workers, in their checkered yellow aprons, are always cheerful. If you need advice, they're always helpful, and if you need a joke- well, even if you don't need it, they'll always have you laughing by the time you're ready to leave. The cooks and bakers out the back can be seen waving at you through the yellow arch, tempting all with the aromas of whatever delight they're baking.

I make sure to visit the Yellow Hen every week, and if I can't make it, I'll send my kids off to buy me a pumpkin-pasty. It will always come back in a yellow-paper bag, with a kind note from the people there, saying they wish me all the best in my week, and that they're looking forward to seeing me the next.


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Sun May 21, 2017 11:42 am
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KayB says...



Amazing and well written. It gave me a homey feeling, reminding me of my farm like lifestyle. Sounds like an amazing place, I wish we had something like that around here. Now I'm hungry because of this.




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Fri May 19, 2017 7:47 pm
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Hi, Dracula.
I was hungry after reading this. It was very well-written. The descriptions were very good. I really want to visit the Yellow Hen Cafe.
I didn't especially expect something gruesome to happen Actually, I would have been disappointed. The Yellow Hen Cafe sounded so warm and cheerful.
Of course, nothing much happens. It doesn't feel like the usual short story. It reminded me of an article in a tourism magazine, rather.
Did you draw your inspiration from a real place?




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totally doesn't want to start an old barn cafe called the Yellow Hen after reading this

This reminded me a bit of some of the newspaper clippings in Fried Green Tomatoes at the Whistle Stop Cafe by Fanny Flagg. It gives a good description of the appearance and atmosphere of a local restaurant that brings people together. Honestly at some point it began to sound so nice there that I started expecting it to do an about-face and turn into a horror story where there were hundreds of bodies found beneath it later on or something.

(I'm not naturally suspicious that way, but when it went on and on about how nice it was, eventually I was like, "Hmmm...maybe this is going to stop being nice at some point.")

As an actual story...there was literally no conflict at all. I mean, at a stretch, the narrator not being able to go there some weeks. Which. I don't know. I don't feel like you need conflict in the traditional sense, but right now this feels more like just a write-in to a newspaper than a story, which maybe was what you were going for but I'm not sure. Like there doesn't seem to be a point.

But considering the ending, I feel like you could tie in some conflict in the narrator's life? Like just mentioning it in passing or even hinting at it, and then we see how the Yellow Hen Cafe is a contrast to that or maybe even the only really happy, wonderful thing in the narrator's life (although we also know they have kids, so hopefully their kids are a happy part of their life most of the time). That would make the ending even better than it already is, because we see how much it means to them to be able to visit the cafe every week and how much difference a little note from the staff can make to them in weeks they can't get there.

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papillote says...


I see exactly what you mean.
There is an old French movie like that: "The Red Inn".
It's awesome!




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