Hello,
I really enjoyed this poem, even though it is the most confusing, confounding, bewildering poem I have ever read. In a good way.
My favorite part was the ending where it says. I really like the repetition of it, how you keep repeating the word ink.
"Ink on a paper
Ink on the snow
Ink in the sky
God is a pen.
I also really liked this part too.
"Blades of light
Enter the sleeping chamber.
The darkness is bleeding
Snors and growls."
I loved all the imagery you used to convey your poem, it made it very deep. I always try to use imagery when I'm writing, but sometimes it doesn't always work for me. It was a great poem even if they were just "Scribbles."
Can't wait to read what you write next.
Carpe diem,
LUNARGIRL
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