I am frying my bubble gum
in the blood juice of
sugar and plum fairies.
I am boiling my hairy fruits
in the bitter tears of
I am roasting my water
over the sins of people that committed them
Hi Buranko! Figured I'd throw a review here to get you out of the Green Room~So usually I'm not the biggest fan of imagery that is sort of hard to follow along with? It can be difficult to understand whether it's being literal or more metaphorically, and blah blah all of that stuff. This is actually really neat though, and all of the imagery sort of loops back into making sense with each other despite being, well, very random.
I am frying my bubble gumin the blood juice ofsugar and plum fairies.
I am boiling my hairy fruitsin the bitter tears ofbitter liquors
I am roasting my waterover the sins of people that committed them
This was a super duper interesting read! Thanks for sharing. It’s quite unique and I really like it.I enjoy how each section begins with the word I. This gives it a smooth feeling as I read. The first two also have the consistency of the word In as well.It’s just so magically strange… like every sentence makes me really try and think. It makes me really try to picture what’s going on and honestly you’ve done an awesome job at that!I applaud you for your great work Ellie
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