Ho! Such a nice piece you have written here. This piece is so different form the others that I have come across and right I am having some difficulty in classifying this. Is this a poem? A story? What ever it is this requires proper planning and some remodelling and construction lol.
Also I really loved the way how you were able to express panic and fear with such lucidity! I know you havr loads of talent hidden in you and to say the the truth I think you make a better poet because you have got a mind like them. Special and different from the others.
Overall I don' t think theres anything to say as you have wrote so little. Please do something about it ok? And yeah keep writing. I hope to see some improvement the next time I see you (your writings).
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