So, I don't know exactly who the Lone Wolf is. Right now I'm thinking communism because lots of people are scared of communism. Whoever it is, maybe you could add a little symbol or something (eg for communism, a hammer and sickle scar across its shoulder).
Anyway,
The last two lines
Your fear was becoming the wolf,
not treating wolves and dogs as kin.
Were absolutely perfect because they had been isolated from the rest of the poem. It's like the rest of the poem was building up to explaining that one point.
Also, it's a very important point. A lot of pain could be saved by 'treating dogs and wolves as kin'. I think you have put forward a simple but valuable message here.
Which is why it's a shame it's a little difficult to unde--
maybe the wolf is democracy...?
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