Heyy Okuro!
Its a very intellectual and a philosophical poem and a very good point to ponder upon.
The title is also very catchy and I liked it ^^
And also I liked the idea of posing a question at the start which makes the poem quite interesting to read and I thoroughly enjoyed reading this piece.
But there's one thing that was not understood while reading and that was:
"And it's all just the question to something else"
It didn't quite make sense when I read it at the first shot :3
But anyway, I would like to also mention the part that I liked in your poem ^^
"Has anything ever really been resolved?
Or has it just been covered up
And hidden from plain sight?
Who knows"
I totally liked the idea and hoping to see more of these types ^^
Good luck,
Keep writing!
SapphireFlames.
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