Sure thing, felistia. I'm just finishing up a huge school project, so I should be able to review more chapters of Ruby of Fire soon as well. Thank you for your patience!
"Sometimes it is better to light a flamethrower than curse the darkness." –Terry Pratchett
Hi there, the first chapter of my novel has plenty of reviews but none of the other chapters do, do you think you could go and give some of them a review?
I was hoping you could review my novel chapters for me? I'm looking for reviews on my chapters 3 and 4, but it definitely helps if you read the previous chapters, for background info and such. Here are the links for chapters 3 and 4, prior chapters can also be accessed from there as well:
I'm also looking for someone to regularly review my chapters as I put them up, so if my story at all interests you and you're willing, I would love for you to do that! If not I totally understand
The bigger the issue, the smaller you write. Remember that. You don’t write about the horrors of war. No. You write about a kid’s burnt socks lying on the road. You pick the smallest manageable part of the big thing, and you work off the resonance. — Richard Price
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