Already in love with this idea. The title captured me from the start, and the introduction line (for lack of a better word) is such an ominous but gruesomely elegant picture. I also just love the use of honey and hands as imagery in poetry, so I may be a little biased... The intro line also gives some spooky vibes to match the Halloween spirit. Extra points. 11/10
Okay, your last poem BLEW me away (all of them are incredible, but something about that one really stood out to me). Your talent is so strong and I can see your own uniqueness shine so brightly though these poems and everything I have seen you post, fantastic work, friend!!! <33 cant wait to see more
Who's to say that my light is better than your darkness? Who's to say death is better than your darkness? Who am I to say?
I am not what happened to me, I am what I choose to become.
Good luck!
