Brief description of what has happened before: Isabella was in a car accident a few days later her boyfriend whose in a band breaks up with her. Jay, the boyfriend, has a cousin named Gary and that how Isabella met Jay. He is also in the band. He consoles Isabella cause theyre best friends and they slowly fall in love. He treats her to a weekend get away and gives her a promise ring to always love her. But now shes pregnant and she doesnt know what to do. whether to tell him or not.
Hey, You review chapter 12 of my romantic novel Let Me Love You The synopsis then was: Isabella was in a car accident a few days later her boyfriend whose in a band breaks up with her. Jay, the boyfriend, has a cousin named Gary and that how Isabella met Jay. He is also in the band. He consoles Isabella cause theyre best friends and they slowly fall in love. He treats her to a weekend get away and gives her a promise ring to always love her. But now shes pregnant and she doesnt know what to do. whether to tell him or not.
Well Now I have chapter 20 up and it is the ending. What has happened to this point is that you tol gary she was pregnant adn they found out they were going to be parents to twins, but one of the twins has a heart problem and they don't know if she will make it.
Hello, Carlito! I have a new romantic short story (kind of like a letter that is not expected to be read): topic76229.html
It would be great to get some reviews on it! Take your time. And thank you in advance!
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