Young Writers Society

Hey,

I have found I quite like reviewing. So I thought I would post on here and see if some people want their stories reviewing.

Just a warning, I am on here to learn grammar and punctuation, so don't expect that in a review from me. I will look at the story/chapter as a whole and give my opinion, I will look at characters and how they are developed and also sometimes I will comment on annoying sentences that I think don't work well and plot. I will also try and suggest things that could make any of these elements better just to help you along. In terms of photography I have studied it for a year and can offer some advice. My reviews aren't usually excessively long lol

Stuff I will Review -

Fantasy - This is my favourite genre
Sci-Fi
Romance
Other
Action/Adventure
Photography

Stuff I may not review -
Scripts - I can only offer basic advice
FanFiction - PM me and say what it is based off. If I don't know it, it is likely I won't review it
Historical Fiction - I can't do historical accuracy but I can review it just on a story level

Stuff I won't Review -
Poetry - because I don't read poetry and wouldn't know how to review it
Non-Fiction
Lyrics
Art - I'm no artist lol


Just tell me the title
Tell me the genre
Give me the link

and I'll see what I can do

Oh and I forgot to put...Its free! lol

YAY! I'm the first one!
Okay, this is a fantasy-romance, called 'To the Death'. Here are the first three parts:
Prologue:
topic42955.html

Chapter 1:
Part 1: topic42563.html
Part 2: post499174.html#499174

Thanks!

Would you like me to review all of the parts?

Title: Addicting Poison
Genre: Romance
Summary: A vampire girl has to choose between her heart and her duty.
link:http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic40437.html


if you decide to read on for some reason, the old version is called Poison Love. The prolouge and chapter one are edited. i am not sure if chapter two is or not.

Happy reading.

OK Vivacious I have done your 3 reviews! Sorry it took so long

Night Mistress I'm going to try and do yours tonight even though it's half past midnight lol

Woop finished Night Mistress!

Currently no queue

Hey, beckiw! Could you review this for me?

My Only Sunshine ch.1

It's romantic fiction and chapter 2 ought to be coming along any day now . . .

Thanks!

~Sunny

Hey, 200397 nice to meet you

I'll get to your chapter tomorrow because it is currently 2am here and I am going to bed! lol but I have no university tomorrow, so extra time for reviewing!

Done your review 200397! I also reviewed your second chapter.

Currently no queue

Review these and I'll love you forever. :]

topic43179.html
topic43266.html

Ok Silversunlight, both of your reviews are done. Feel free to love me now forever more!

Currently no queue.

How about topic43618.html

here is a little bit about it!

A childish girl who lives in a childish illusion that the world is loving and death doesn't exist. However, when she moves in with her stepmother everything will change. Simply meaning that a man comes along and bursts her bubble. Come and read the horrifying and disturbing horror/comedy about a girl and her neighbor, a homicidal mass murdering maniac!

Done your review Maki-Chan

Hi! Could you please review my works? I would like to know what you think. I understand if this takes you a long time! Help needed!


This is me book called split personalities (I really need a new name!)
Prologue
Chapter 1 Part 1
Chapter 1 Part 2
Chapter 2 Part 1
Chapter 2 Part 2
Chapter 3 (only one part)
Genre: Action/Adventure Fiction

Could you please focus on the believability of the piece?
Sorry about posting them all at once, but you don't have to review them all... you can do the first one or two and then give up if need be!

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-ALICE