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ScarlettWinters
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Thu Jan 19, 2012 1:50 am
ScarlettWinters says... · Thu Jan 19, 2012 1:50 am
Hey Ahmad
so i have a peice called clair and the stone statues that i posted to general fiction novels a while ago and cant seem to get many reviews on.Its a little long so that might be why. Anyway i would really appreciate if you would review.
thanks,
Scarlett




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RedMoon
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Mon Jan 30, 2012 8:54 pm
RedMoon says... · Mon Jan 30, 2012 8:54 pm
Hey, Ahmad. I have a new story that I just posted, and I need a review before I start working on the first chapter. Thanks. Here is the link:

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=93092
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Blues
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Tue Jan 31, 2012 10:08 am
Blues says... · Tue Jan 31, 2012 10:08 am
Scarlett - do you have a link? :)

RedMoon - I'll get to that as soon as I can! :)




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AmeliaCogin
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Tue Jan 31, 2012 6:11 pm
AmeliaCogin says... · Tue Jan 31, 2012 6:11 pm
work.php?id=92956

Hey Mac, hows things? Havent spoken in ages! Hows your novel coming on? Would you like me to drop in and review any new chapters for you?

And, I hope you dont mind me asking for a review...you must be busy! Thanks in advance, and the offer for reviews always stands :)




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Blues
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Lauren2010
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Sun Feb 05, 2012 3:58 pm
Lauren2010 says... · Sun Feb 05, 2012 3:58 pm
Ahmad! Would you mind?
work.php?id=93087

It's a short story, but kind of a long one xD

Thanks bud!

-Lauren-
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Blues
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Sun Feb 05, 2012 10:50 pm
Blues says... · Sun Feb 05, 2012 10:50 pm
Hey, Lauren! :D

I'll be glad to do that for you. I'll make a start tonight, and I'll probably have it done by tomorrow or after tomorrow (depending if I go to school).




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Blues
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Jas
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Wed Feb 15, 2012 1:14 am
Jas says... · Wed Feb 15, 2012 1:14 am
work.php?id=93230

That please! Oh and I was just wondering whether you were going to get to the think I posted a few weeks ago? It's totes fine if you can't, but maybe you forgot about it or something...?
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Blues
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Wed Feb 15, 2012 9:40 am
Blues says... · Wed Feb 15, 2012 9:40 am
Sure! :)

Hm. I'm not sure about that one - I'm pretty sure I got everything done, but it looks like I must've forgotten it. I'll go over my thread to check again. Thanks for reminding me! XD




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Nargles
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Sat Feb 18, 2012 6:05 am
Nargles says... · Sat Feb 18, 2012 6:05 am
hey there Ahmad,
I was hoping you could give a review of my first piece. It is a short story called what it is like and I would love some feedback!!

thanks Nargles :D
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Natural Militia
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Sun Feb 19, 2012 6:28 pm
Natural Militia says... · Sun Feb 19, 2012 6:28 pm
Hey Ahmad,

I wrote a first chapter to a novel recently titled Redemption - Chapter 1. If you could review it, that would be most appreciated. The chapter is intended to be incredibly short, I debated on whether to call it a prologue or chapter 1, but I hate prologues, so I just called it chapter 1.

Thanks,
Militia




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Blues
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Thu Feb 23, 2012 10:11 pm
Blues says... · Thu Feb 23, 2012 10:11 pm
I'll get to them as soon as I can then! :)




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VampireSenshi
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Sat Mar 03, 2012 6:19 pm
VampireSenshi says... · Sat Mar 03, 2012 6:19 pm
Hey Ahmad!

If you have the time!

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=93649
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Blues
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