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Done that!

... well aaaages ago. I forgot XD

Next, please!




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Spam, you say?

http://youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?t=91163

http://youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?t=90250

http://youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?t=89662

http://youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?t=88160

http://youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?t=88380

http://youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?t=88026

Most of them are 'The Space Between Infinity' but a few are short stories. :]
You don't have to do all of them if you don't want.
I hope I don't seem rude requesting so much.

:]
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but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

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Oh, not at all! :D

I'm off to bed now so I'll try and do them tomorrow, if possible.

Woo hoo!

Edit:

I'm gonna put all the links and make a mini-checklist for myself :)


http://youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?t=88160

http://youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?t=88380




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dear ahmadblues, could you please review my work-in-progress story i am not sure how to post a link but the story is called inspector woolsome chapter one it is in historical fiction.thanks...sockmonkey away
its built on lies...just like the mafia the cia and fox news...sockmonkey...away!




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greetings.

I would love if you could review this: viewtopic.php?f=6&t=91865

Thanks so much! Message me if you want a review in return!
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Hey, despite the fact that we're not doing the whole points thing right now, would you be willing to review a novel for me? I only have up through chapter 4, part 1 written - that's mostly what I want a review on is that chapter, but probably you'd have to read the stuff prior to that so you'd know where you are anyway...

Anyway, here are the links to all chapters in case you're interested:

chapter 1, part 1: http://youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopi ... 50#p912250

chapter 1, part 2: http://youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopi ... 81#p914681

chapter 1, part 3: http://youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopi ... 01#p919401

chapter 2, part 1: http://youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopi ... 20#p922520

chapter 2, part 2: http://youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopi ... 39#p926839

chapter 3, part 1: http://youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopi ... 43#p928443

chapter 3, part 2: http://youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopi ... 78#p929478

chapter 4, part 1: http://youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopi ... 06#p942706

Wow, that was long...




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Hello AhmadBlues, could you review my story called Achilles. It's fantasy and I hope you like it! :D Thanks!




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Sockmonkey, Valentine, I finished yours :) Well. A few days ago anyway XD

Blue, Alfonso, I'll have them done for tomorrow, when I wake up. Thanks for request! :)




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Hey Ahmad, would you mind reviewing the first few chapters of the novel I started? I got a few good reviews on my first but after that the numbers went down and I haven't been getting the help I think it needs. Thank you sooo much! The work is called Recruited.
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I'm double sided
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I kind of like it
When I make you cry
'Cause I'm twisted up, twisted up
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Heeeey there.
I'm new around here, and I just started a prologue of a story I had in my mind for months on end.
The prologue leads up to, like, literally a novel, so it's kind of important.
I'd like a bit of input, whatever it may be, I don't mind.
Thanks! :3
I'll review back if you want.
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Awesome! More requests! ^_^ I'll have them done as soon as possible.




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Hai there my ducky =D *gives bread*

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Qenguin! Thanks for posting the link. I'll get to it when I'm done with the other reviews ^_^




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Hello! I heard you were a good reviewer, so would you mind reviewing my short story Motion in a Minute?

Thanks so much!

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