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STobsessed
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Sat Nov 19, 2011 5:29 pm
STobsessed says... · Sat Nov 19, 2011 5:29 pm
topic90467.html Can you review my short story? Please and thank you.
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Rascalover
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Sat Nov 19, 2011 10:18 pm
Rascalover says... · Sat Nov 19, 2011 10:18 pm
all done, who's next? :pirate3:
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peanutgallery007
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Mon Nov 21, 2011 6:23 pm
peanutgallery007 says... · Mon Nov 21, 2011 6:23 pm
Why hello there ^_^

It'd be fantastic if you'd review my poem for me. Something's wrong with it but I don't know what.

Thanks in advance :)
Have a peanut =)

Try your hand at my poetry contest!

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Rascalover
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Sat Jan 14, 2012 11:57 pm
Rascalover says... · Sat Jan 14, 2012 11:57 pm
It wont let me click on your link for your poem :( Send another and I will definitely look at it.

For now who else needs a review?! :D
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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Jas
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Sun Jan 15, 2012 1:19 am
Jas says... · Sun Jan 15, 2012 1:19 am
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It's newly edited. Thanks! :D
I am nothing
but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

~*~




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Nike
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Sun Jan 15, 2012 5:05 am
Nike says... · Sun Jan 15, 2012 5:05 am
can you review: http://youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopi ... 26&t=92647

Thanks!

Nike (:
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Rascalover
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Sun Jan 15, 2012 7:36 am
Rascalover says... · Sun Jan 15, 2012 7:36 am
all done :D

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There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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Benrobertringrose
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Sun Jan 15, 2012 2:39 pm
Benrobertringrose says... · Sun Jan 15, 2012 2:39 pm
Hello!

Would love a review on this:

viewtopic.php?f=6&t=92344

Thanks in advance :)




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Rascalover
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Mon Jan 16, 2012 12:02 am
Rascalover says... · Mon Jan 16, 2012 12:02 am
Your welcome!

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Stack 'em up!
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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ShootingStars
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Tue Jan 17, 2012 12:12 pm
ShootingStars says... · Tue Jan 17, 2012 12:12 pm
Will you please review this novel? Thanks! :D
viewtopic.php?f=365&t=92610

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Rascalover
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Sat Jan 21, 2012 7:00 am
Rascalover says... · Sat Jan 21, 2012 7:00 am
All done!

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There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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Rika
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Sat Jan 21, 2012 11:02 am
Rika says... · Sat Jan 21, 2012 11:02 am
Hello,
I am new to YWS. The atmosphere around here is very inspiring. I couldn't stop myself from posting my work. I have written an article On Euthanasia;it's pros and cons under the General Articles category of the non-fiction section. I would be immensely grateful If you put forward your views about it. I would appreciate criticism as well! thank you! :) I have given the link below -
viewtopic.php?f=388&t=92734




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scifyfantacywriter01
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Mon Jan 23, 2012 1:41 pm
scifyfantacywriter01 says... · Mon Jan 23, 2012 1:41 pm
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Hey, I'm scify. this is my new thing i've been working on. I hope you enjoy it. Thanks
When people think of beauty, they think of bright colors, purity, or goodness. When I think of beauty, I think of the darkness. Beauty has a dark side, and I like it. Light is pretty but darkness is passionate, sinister, and sexy as hell.




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fiction903
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Tue Jan 24, 2012 12:34 am
fiction903 says... · Tue Jan 24, 2012 12:34 am
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Hey I'm Fiction. I would really appreciate if you could review my poem. Thank you so much.




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Rascalover
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Tue Jan 24, 2012 1:30 am
Rascalover says... · Tue Jan 24, 2012 1:30 am
All done! Who's in need of a review next?
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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