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All done! Who else?
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Are you still looking for things to review?
Feel free to just randomly message me, I get bored easily.

I'm a black, non-binary transgender boy, who is a Christian witch (tentative for now). I'm also a panromantic asexual. I sell poetry; contact me if you're interested in buying poems from me.




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kingofeli wrote:Are you still looking for things to review?



Yes! I am! :D
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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Do you mind looking at these? They're short and new
how do we live like this?
there is blood on your hands
Feel free to just randomly message me, I get bored easily.

I'm a black, non-binary transgender boy, who is a Christian witch (tentative for now). I'm also a panromantic asexual. I sell poetry; contact me if you're interested in buying poems from me.




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Hey, it would be awesome if you could review my poem "Hope" or "The Struggle". I want to know what people think about my work. :) I'm not sure what you can focus on; I guess whatever catches your eye. I'm still fairly new on this site. :) Thanks mate!
Here's the link: Hope




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kingofeli wrote:Do you mind looking at these? They're short and new
how do we live like this?
there is blood on your hands


Finished! :) Thanks for the great reads!
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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Kajka wrote:Hey, it would be awesome if you could review my poem "Hope" or "The Struggle". I want to know what people think about my work. :) I'm not sure what you can focus on; I guess whatever catches your eye. I'm still fairly new on this site. :) Thanks mate!
Here's the link: Hope

All done, thanks for the request!

Any else need a review?
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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Here is the link to my story:

It's super short! Also it's a little weird just warning you

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1dPO ... JXhsQ/edit




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jakethegenius wrote:Here is the link to my story:

It's super short! Also it's a little weird just warning you

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1dPO ... JXhsQ/edit


Did you upload this to a forum in the create section of your portfolio on YWS, or do you just want me to message you the review? I have never done one on google drive before... but yes! i will review it!
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Hey, I've got a story for you.

The chapters are pretty hefty sometimes, and the story may be hard to follow in some spots. Will you help me out? I've got three for you.

13: Where the Black Sheep Wrest - (Ch. 13): Reign Check

14: Where the Black Sheep Wrest - (Ch. 14): Grapple the Rains

15: Where the Black Sheep Wrest - (Ch. 15): Bad Blood




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Wriskypump wrote:Hey, I've got a story for you.

The chapters are pretty hefty sometimes, and the story may be hard to follow in some spots. Will you help me out? I've got three for you.

13: Where the Black Sheep Wrest - (Ch. 13): Reign Check

14: Where the Black Sheep Wrest - (Ch. 14): Grapple the Rains

15: Where the Black Sheep Wrest - (Ch. 15): Bad Blood



I will finish all reviews by this weekend! :)
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Thank you so much! If you have anything you would like reviewed now, or anytime in the future, just let me know :D




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I bought a cactus. A week later it died. I got depressed because I thought Damn, I am less nurturing than a desert.
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Anywho, way open and ready for business! What wants/needs a review?!
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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