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This please! Thanks so much! :D

I'd like a more writing and character based review rather than frammar and sentence structure and all that. :D
I am nothing
but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

~*~




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All done. Any one next?
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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*Bump*
Anyone?
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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Should I beg???
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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lol, well as you're offering, I'd appreciate any feedback on the first chapter of Foxes - which can be found here: work.php?id=93102

Note, though - it is rated 18 for naughty language.
I wrote the above just for you.




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Hi, Not sure if you'll like, only part 1.Please review. Criticismwill be taken with open arms :D work.php?id=93232
There is no such thing as a stranger. Only friends we haven't met yet.

Previously Just Toby





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All done :)
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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HIYA!

I'll review something of yours, too, if ya' like.
I want to play a game.




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This please and any other things of mine you want to!
♥unsocialbutterfly♥




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Would you please review the first chapter of my novel, I would like to make it more enjoyable to read. :)

work.php?id=93603
LONG LIVE LOVE




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could you review the first part of my short story?
work.php?id=93605
if anyone wants a review, post on my profile and I'll get to it in a couple days.




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So here's something I posted and I am eagerly awaiting a review....
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Please :)
Your motor's unstable,
Your like an
Undwinding
Cable
Car
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Hi guys!! I am back!! who needs or wants a review??
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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I do! :D I Am.
My pronouns are they/them.

Formerly Zhia and Reneia



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