Reviews from a Marine (Re-opened)

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Agh, I'm so sorry, I totally blanked and forgot about these. I'll probably do them tomorrow. :)
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Hi :)

I was wondering if you would review my screenplay, Freya's Replacement? It is a sci-fi/fantasy TV show. (Only a couple parts are up yet).

Thanks :)
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If you have some free time, would you mind checking out this: post784454.html#p784454 ?


Thanks- I appreciate it. c:


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hey if you have time, could you do the first three chapters of my novel? i've gotten only one review on chapter four and none on five, and it's been a while, so if reading them doesn't make you miserable, it would be nice if you could also do four and five. the links are here:
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if anyone wants a review, post on my profile and I'll get to it in a couple days.



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