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Riveneye
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Wed Jun 23, 2010 1:51 am
Riveneye says... · Wed Jun 23, 2010 1:51 am
Can you review these two for me. They're both fantasy and going into a novel with a bunch of other short stories.

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic65637.html
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic65638.html

Thanks
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Wolferion
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Wed Jun 23, 2010 10:29 am
Wolferion says... · Wed Jun 23, 2010 10:29 am
F1shes : Done =)

Riveneye : I'd like to ask for some time =) I've noticed both your works are long and I've got some other stuff to take care of at the moment ^^
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Riveneye
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Wed Jun 23, 2010 4:35 pm
Riveneye says... · Wed Jun 23, 2010 4:35 pm
It's okay I just need them finished by the end of the week if thats okay with you.
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LittlePrincess
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Wed Jun 23, 2010 4:53 pm
LittlePrincess says... · Wed Jun 23, 2010 4:53 pm
Hey, if you don't mind I'd love if you could review my short story My Falling Sun

I only have two chapters up (in three parts) so here is what I have:
topic65564.html
topic65570.html
topic65809.html

Thank you so much and I hope you like them! :)
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Wolferion
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Thu Jun 24, 2010 6:34 am
Wolferion says... · Thu Jun 24, 2010 6:34 am
Sure ^^ I'll finish it by today once I come back from school, so just hang on =)

Same applies to you LittlePrincess =)
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Wolferion
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Thu Jun 24, 2010 3:08 pm
Wolferion says... · Thu Jun 24, 2010 3:08 pm
Riveneye : Both reviewed =) Hope it helped.

Littleprincess : I've finished the 1st chapter =) I'm going to take a break and finish your 2nd chapter later.
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Riveneye
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Thu Jun 24, 2010 10:52 pm
Riveneye says... · Thu Jun 24, 2010 10:52 pm
Thanks a bunch man.It was quite helpful especially to point out all of the commas. ;)
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Wolferion
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Sun Jun 27, 2010 8:24 pm
Wolferion says... · Sun Jun 27, 2010 8:24 pm
I'm very sorry I haven't finished your two works and stopped whole review thing X_X I had a lot take care of ^^'
It's almost midnight so I have to go, but tomorrow I'll make sure I'll finish the undone and will be definitely ready to help more people :)
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jDawn
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Mon Jul 12, 2010 9:58 pm
jDawn says... · Mon Jul 12, 2010 9:58 pm
Hi! I was wondering if you could please reveiw the first chapter of my novel. It is called The Hunt. It's Fanasy, but not completly. There is no rush at all on the review so take your time! Thank You Much!

topic66825.html

- Jessica :smt001
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Wolferion
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Thu Jul 15, 2010 8:18 am
Wolferion says... · Thu Jul 15, 2010 8:18 am
Done =)
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spiderman
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Thu Jul 15, 2010 7:30 pm
spiderman says... · Thu Jul 15, 2010 7:30 pm
Mayt you please reveiw this http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic66956.html
Despite the lies that you're making
Your love is mine for the taking
My love is just waiting
To clothe you in crimson roses

WHISPERS IN THE DARK LYRICS - SKILLET




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Leilani
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Thu Jul 15, 2010 7:33 pm
Leilani says... · Thu Jul 15, 2010 7:33 pm
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?t=66775 thank you ^0^
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Wolferion
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Sun Jul 18, 2010 3:06 pm
Wolferion says... · Sun Jul 18, 2010 3:06 pm
Guess all done and I'm back from being busy with fighting myself. If somebody needs a review, I'll happily review without requesting something in return =) It's summer holidays, let's enjoy some stories.
~Don't beg for things, do it yourself or else you'll never get anything~
-Formerly Shinda




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blackbird12
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Tue Jul 20, 2010 11:18 pm
blackbird12 says... · Tue Jul 20, 2010 11:18 pm
Would you mind reviewing this for me? Thank you in advance!

topic67224.html
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I would have risen from the ground.
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Wolferion
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Wed Jul 21, 2010 9:06 am
Wolferion says... · Wed Jul 21, 2010 9:06 am
Done! Hope it helped =)
~Don't beg for things, do it yourself or else you'll never get anything~
-Formerly Shinda

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