This is part of the the first chapter from a book I am writing about packs of wolves living in the forest. I will not be posting all of it on here though. Reviews and feedback are appreciated. Thank You!
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Sila brushed against my white fur as he walked ahead of me, and I shivered. It was almost pitch black in the woods at night; the wind whistled through the forest, ruffling my fur as I walked with my tribe. The reek of the Aqua Tribe filled my nose; I knew we were close to their territory.
Degla glanced at me, my fear melted into confidence as my leader nodded for us to enter the river. It felt refreshing after a day in the warm summer sun. I stepped out of the water and onto the muddy shore; my fur slick against my body up to my neck. Suddenly, Gyra, who was still in the water, yelped. Degla turned to face his tribe member.
"What?" Degla whispered to Gyra. That's when I saw it. Two wolf heads emerged from the deeper end of the river. Nobody in my tribe moved an inch. The two wolves fully emerged; their fur dripping and their teeth bared.
" Gyra! Get out of there!" Degla shouted at him. Gyra scampered out of the water; splashing and making a scene. The two soaked, dripping, white wolves started slowly moving threw the water. I recognized one of them immediately. it was a she-wolf named Zalia. She was tough and knew how to fight. My breath quickened at each step she took. Dragging them out.
I glanced down at the scar on my leg; the way it healed was frightening and made me feel sick. I stared at Zailia. Her proud eyes seizing me up.
She stopped right in front of me. " Quilla," She addressed me, sticking her muzzle up. She walked on along with the other wolf so they stood in front of Degla.
" Fools," the wolf spat at Degla. Degla didn't look intimidated. He simply ignored the wolf's comment and stared into his eyes. More wolves from the Aqua Tribe emerged from either side and two more came from the water, staying close to the shore. A single gray wolf stood behind Degla. It was Oglo, the tribe leader.
"Oglo." Degla addressed him politely. In return, Oglo growled.
" Why are you here? This was not a wise decision of yours to trespass on out territory, Degla." Oglo hissed at my leader. His gray fur ruffled in the summer wind.
" Oglo, we mean no harm tonight. We just have a simple preposition for your tribe." Degla told him calmly. Oglo looked unsure, but nodded his head for Degla to go on.
" The puddles and water sources we used have dried up from the extreme heat. My tribe has nothing to drink. We would like permission to drink from your river," Degla said. Oglo chuckled and the rest of his tribe joined in, like a pack of wild hyenas.
" So weak, asking your enemies to share? What happened to Degla the mighty?" Oglo chuckled. Degla growled at Oglo. Definitely not accepting such a joke. Degla got into Oglo's face; his eyes starting to grow cold.
" My tribe is anything but weak, Oglo." Degla hissed. Oglo and his tribe finally stopped laughing and Oglo nodded his head.
" Fine, alright. You may drink from the river. But only during the day. When the sun sets and darkness falls upon this forest, you have no right to drink from my stream. And when the sun rises yet again, you do have my permission. We will be kind for now, Degla. But don't get used to it." Oglo said. Degla let out a sigh of relief and his eyes softened.
" Thank you, Oglo. This is greatly appreciated." Degla thanked him and bowed respectfully. Oglo nodded for him to go. Degla padded off back across the river with his tribe on his tail.
We entered camp moments later. Degla stayed at the entrance, chatting softly with the two guards. I observed from the clearing in the center. My brother, Sila walked sleepily into the den he shared with my family; my mother, Era and my father, Ekla. Gyra was chatting with his mother, Kari. Probably over exaggerating the midnight story at the river.
Degla howled for a tribe meeting and padded forward a few steps from the entrance; leaving drops of water with every step he took. His eyes glowed with pride in his tribe as he watched the wolves circle around their leader.
"Tonight, we have succeeded in our quest for water. Oglo says that we may drink from the river in daylight, but drinking is forbidden at nightfall. I would like to talk to my deputy; Kenja, in my den," Degla said; bowing his head in respect for his tribe.
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