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afeefah
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Sun May 24, 2009 7:58 pm
afeefah says... · Sun May 24, 2009 7:58 pm
Hi. Could you please review this for me?

topic47818.html

Thanks! :D




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Rascalover
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Mon May 25, 2009 10:40 pm
Rascalover says... · Mon May 25, 2009 10:40 pm
All done, nice piece :)

Anyone up and running for a speedy review????
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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Rascalover
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Wed May 27, 2009 8:09 pm
Rascalover says... · Wed May 27, 2009 8:09 pm
Do I have to beg??? :)
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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Sins
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Wed May 27, 2009 8:54 pm
Sins says... · Wed May 27, 2009 8:54 pm
Hey x
Could you please review my poem, I'll give you a virtual ice cream!
Thanks !

Meg xoxo

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I didn't know what to put here so I put this.




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Rascalover
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Fri May 29, 2009 12:04 am
Rascalover says... · Fri May 29, 2009 12:04 am
Thanks for the request good poem

Any one else needin' a review ??????????
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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Sins
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Sat May 30, 2009 12:49 pm
Sins says... · Sat May 30, 2009 12:49 pm
Thanks for the review! :D It was really helpful :)
I know you've just reviewed my poem but could you please review my fiction if that's possible :)
If not, don't worry :wink:
Thanks in advance

Meg xoxo

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I didn't know what to put here so I put this.




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Rascalover
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Mon Jun 01, 2009 1:32 am
Rascalover says... · Mon Jun 01, 2009 1:32 am
All done :)


Any one out there needing a review???
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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Rascalover
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Thu Jun 04, 2009 12:33 am
Rascalover says... · Thu Jun 04, 2009 12:33 am
ya know ya need one :)
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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Rascalover
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Sat Jun 06, 2009 3:27 pm
Rascalover says... · Sat Jun 06, 2009 3:27 pm
bump*
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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borntoshop
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Sun Jun 07, 2009 4:59 am
borntoshop says... · Sun Jun 07, 2009 4:59 am
Link...topic47579.html

Very much appreciated!

Not sure if link will pop up but it's on my profile, Love Hurts!
:D




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Rascalover
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Mon Jun 08, 2009 4:59 am
Rascalover says... · Mon Jun 08, 2009 4:59 am
Thanks for the request. All done

Whos up next??

Pretty please you know you want one :)
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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Rascalover
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Thu Jun 11, 2009 4:30 am
Rascalover says... · Thu Jun 11, 2009 4:30 am
*bump* anyone need a review?????????????
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

Who needs a review? :) http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic38078.html




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Bickazer
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Sat Jun 13, 2009 3:21 am
Bickazer says... · Sat Jun 13, 2009 3:21 am
Errr, if you don't mind long things...could you take a look at "The End of Time" chapters one and two? Chapter one already has a good many in-depth reviews, but I really need reviews for chapter two so feel free to skim through chapter one if you want to (so far the two chapters aren't really that connected, either).

Chapter one: topic48651.html

Chapter two (part 1): topic49181.html

Thanking you very much in advance. I know it's long, so that's why I'll return reviews if you finish with it. :)
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Plus-One
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Sat Jun 13, 2009 2:16 pm
Plus-One says... · Sat Jun 13, 2009 2:16 pm
Ooh I have a strange piece that needs critiquing before I can enter it into a contest...I'm a bit unsure of it myself, so critique would be very nice! :)

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic49318.html
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Jamie_rocks
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Sun Jun 14, 2009 9:52 am
Jamie_rocks says... · Sun Jun 14, 2009 9:52 am
Could you please review this for me? It's the third chapter of a supernatural novel I'm working on. You don't need to review the first two, though if you want this to make more sense you may want to at least skim through them. Otherwise I'm just looking for what you think about my writing style, and nitpicks, and characters and such. Thanks in advance.

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