Hi. So, I did this for the Forest Setting Contest but liked the idea and may use this as a Prologue for a story. Any reviews would be welcome!
The Final Game
Rivulets of blood trickle down my cheek leaving streaks of red in their wake. The trees swallow up the light greedily and I can barely see a metre ahead of me. I stumble on, knowing that to stop now means certain death. Who am I kidding? I’ve got no chance anyway. What's the cause of my pain? My seventeen year old winged brother, Kire. You might be thinking, 'Whoah, wait a minute. Winged?' Kire was the one that used to look after me and care for me. He was bitter about the responsibility he had, the fact that he had to look after me, he wasn't free to do what he wanted to do. So when he almost lost the use of his arms stopping an eagle from mauling me that was the last straw. Bitterness won over and his sanity began to disintegrate, bit by bit. He invented games. Hunting games that put my life on the hook time after time. The hunter was Kire. The first game I played was at the age of ten. It got steadily worst. Now at fourteen, this latest game is one to end all games, forever. The objective: reach the end of the forest. Sounds simple but I’ve got Kire hunting me down and this time I won’t get away with an injury. No, this time he wants my life.
Lost in my thoughts, I trip and fall to the ground, sprawling face first in the soil. It would be so easy to just lie down, to just give up. But no. I can’t. While there’s life, there’s hope. I repeat the thought in my head, and concentrate on my objective, my goal. Pushing myself to my feet, I begin to run, new, fresh hope coursing through my veins. I can do this. There can’t be that far to go. I settle into a steady rhythm though my heart leaps wildly at every noise.
It’s so dark here that every noise, makes me jump, rattling my resolve. Not only that but the trees themselves seem to move, swaying from side to side when I walk past them, even though there’s no wind, not a slight breeze. I ponder over the hopelessness of my situation and fear turns rapidly to anger. I pick up a dead bough from the ground and hit the forest floor with frustration. I hit a dead, rotting log and it explodes, bits of wood flying everywhere. I hear a bird cawing indignantly and fear sets back in. Now caution says its piece. You idiot. You damn idiot. You’ve just told him where you are. I don’t waste any more time. I run. Fast.
After a minute of quick sprinting I see a welcome sight. Daylight and a clearing, maybe 15 metres ahead of me. I put on a burst of speed. Hope rekindles. Trees pass in a blur. 10 metres...5 metres...
Then out from the canopy, drops Kire, his black hair all over the place, his blue eyes like chips of ice. Merciless. I’m afraid. But this time it’s my life or his. This time I’ll fight back, because otherwise I’ll never be free from him.
“Do you honestly think you can beat me?”
I just stare at him, face like stone. Confusion flits over Kire’s face and I take advantage of it to think of a plan because that’s the only way I can beat Kire, by outwitting him. The seeds of an idea take root in my mind and I turn to the tree I’m standing next to. I climb up it nimbly and reaching the topmost branches I do the first childish thing that springs to mind. I stick my tongue out at him.
“Can’t catch me,” I say in a singsong voice, taunting and provoking Kire. He reacts exactly the way I expect. He flies up to the branch and lands on it. The branch creaks under our combined weight but it holds. I sigh inwardly with relief.
“You’ve gone too far,” Kire growls, stepping forward. “Way too far. I’m going to teach you a lesson you’re not going to forget.”
As Kire lunges forward, my plans wither and die but I step smartly back onto the branch behind me. Kire jumps onto my wide bough and I make no move to stop him. Not wasting time on words, I duck under his punch and almost loose my balance, teetering on the edge of the bough. I regain my footing and turn around just in time to see Kire charge towards me. I’ve got nowhere to move. He knocks me off the branch and I begin to think I’m going to die after all, but I land on other branches. Kire unfurls his wings and glides gently into to land on the forest floor. I begin to think of escape but then Kire does something that takes me totally unawares. He begins to control the tree. The branches wrap themselves around me, imprisoning me. I panic, bucking and thrashing but to no avail. Kire says something in a harsh, barking voice and I’m dropped from the height of five feet. As I land face first in the leaf litter, I hear Kire snapping a branch from a tree nearby and I scramble to my feet. Kire follows, beating me ruthlessly back with the bough that’s as thick as my wrist. I fall against a tree and the branches wrap themselves around me, capturing me in branches as inflexible as iron bars. Kire advances, the madness clear in his bloodshot eyes.
“Well. It comes to this does it?” I say, not attempting to hide the bitterness in my voice. “Kire, why?” Part of me still hopes that I can bring back the Kire he once was.
“Why?” he growls, staring at me with those cold, inhuman eyes. “Why? I’ll tell you why. You ruined my life. I looked after you and cared for you but what did I get out of it? Nothing. It’s too late to change that now but I can get revenge for those lost years. I can be satisfied, but only with your death.”
“Kire, how is killing me going to change anything? Just leave me alone! Go away! You’re not Kire any more! You’re not my brother!” I sob, knowing it’s pointless, knowing that nothing I can do will bring the real Kire out of the monster he has become.
Kire says nothing and looks at me with his empty, bloodshot eyes. He swings the branch towards me and I close my eyes and I give up hope. Then words form suddenly in my mind and I scream something incomprehensible. The branches that were imprisoning me lash out at Kire. His neck snaps like dried wood and as he slides to the floor with a dull, empty thump I feel no remorse at all. I gave him a chance to go away, to leave me alone, but he didn’t take it. I clamber down from the tree and stand there a minute, contemplating my new power and a life in the forest. I shake my head my headdecisively. No. Too many bad memories here. Then I step out into the clearing, for a new life, without Kire.
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