Young Writers Society

Just finished my first novel, right before school starts back up! Woo! Since I'ma be a senior (and picked all simple classes) I'll be takin' it easy with an Acer Timeline and lots of free... well... time!

So...

"Give me your tired, your poor,
Your huddled masses yearning to be read,
The wretched refuse of your teeming hard-drive.
Send these, the reviewless, web-tost, the unrevised to me,
I lift my lamp beside the golden keyboard!"

As the ripped quote implied: Give it all. I'll do my very best!

Here's a little stat on my personal tastes you can look at to temporarily relieve your boredom. Just because it's ranked low doesn't mean I won't do my best for ya

Total Bias = 100% - divided among the following categories wrote:Any type of Advanced Critiques/Novels: 25%
Non AC/N Fiction: 25%
All Poetry: 15%
Non AC/N Non-Fiction: 15%
Short/Medium Scripts: 6%
Long/+ Scripts: 4%
All Song Lyrics: 4%
All Art: 4%
Other: 2%

What I won't try?: I'll try everything to the best of my ability Note that I love rated "R" things (blame society), so any rating is ok
What I want in return?: Eh, nothing required. I'd be overjoyed if you took a look at my signature, clicked the link, and read a chapter or two (or any of my other works)! But, as I said before, I'll review just for the sake of reviewing!

Hopefully Elinor Brynn doesn't mind me snaggin her queuing system (if you do by any chance, I'll improvise )

To Sumbit something to be reviewed:

Write down the title, the genre, and provide a link to your work. I'll place it in my queue (below), which I hold in stacks of five three at a time. When my stack is full, the others go in the waiting pile (off site). I will eventually get to them; remember, patience is a virtue.

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Queue
1. Running With Wolves
2. Free for now!
3. Free for now!

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Reviews Completed
[Adv. Crit.] Pieces of People
[Shrt. Story] Child's Play
[Shrt. Story] Mission Zero
[Adv. Crit. Excerpt] Red Vendetta
[Shrt. Story] Prydwen Hall
[Shrt. Story] Prydwen Hall II
[Flash Fiction] And Here's Thinking You Were Gone.
[Shrt. Story] Miracles
[Shrt. Story] Love the Sinner



Praise: pro.php?u=12753&i=443
Be warned, I'm a major fan of chopping stories to pieces! (Unless you request a light review or something)

Could you please read Child's Play, part three?
Its dark fiction; posted in other fiction.
It's not up just yet, but it will be by tomorrow, once I rough edit it.
You should probably read parts one and two for clarity.
Thank you.

Part one
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Part two

viewtopic.php?t=52460
Thank you very much
ps part two is rated R; but only one passage is explicit. Its starred for your reading convienience.

empressoftheuniverse wrote:(Post)

Sure thing. PM me when you put it up (or post a response here)!

Note: your part two link is broken.

OK please give me your suggestions on this
topic52595.html
this is part four so you may need to read parts 1-3 first.
Thanks

Hello again!
Sorry about the broken link.
Part three (aka part two point five) is now up!
I'm going to save myself some embarassment and not post the link here. You can find it on my profile.

Finished with Child's Play (loved it!) and on to the Mission Zero series

All done!

Wrapping up with Pieces of People (a damn good story) and then I'm all done with this weeks queue

Hi!!

So here is another story for your reviews, its called Red Vendetta and its actaully an extract from the novel I'm writing.

Here it is.
viewtopic.php?t=52724

Done!

Could you critique the first chapter of my novel, Prydwen Hall? I'm about to send it off and I need to make it pitch perfect. Please help.

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Sure, I'll take a look at it later tonight!

Hey Xunnamius!

I'm Audy. Whenever you have the time, I'd love any feedback on The Collection of Asterisks which is an excerpt of my novel. It's short, just about 800 words. Be as tough as you can. I know it's real "out there" so my main concern is whether or not it's clear to the reader. It should be able to stand alone, but I think you guys should be the judge of that.

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Thanks very much, I appreciate it. I'm going to check out Advent Child, seems to be real interesting!

Could you review this?

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Thanks!

Agk! Forgot to check back here! I'm on it

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