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Actually, I'm working on like overhauling Nevestory, so it's not necessary any more! Thank you though! =D

If you would be willing, I would really enjoy a review on my newest piece My First and Final Escape. It's a very short story located in the Other Fiction forum so it shouldn't be too out of your element for you.

Thanksies!!

There you go, Lily. That's your critique done. Hope it helped. Sorry it took so long, but I've edited the thread to notify me when someone replies, so I should get around to them a lot faster.

I was wondering if you could review the first four chapters of my book?

Chapter 1 & 2

topic46539.html

Chapter 3 and 4

post541780.html#541780

i would like as much detail as you see fit to give it, and please please be honest

Thanks so much xx

There you go, Wic. I hope those helped.

Anyone else? I'm on holiday now, and the reviews will be a lot faster.

Oh really, a lot faster, well in that case: ForEver, ForNever, ForAlways

Rather short prologue of a short novella I'm doing.

Anyways, I've always appreciated your reviews so anything you have to say would be big help. Also, if there's anything you would like reviewed, all you have to do is ask.


~lily

I hope that was fast enough for you, Lily. xD I am restless today, apparently. I have a craving to review. I never know what to critique unless I'm linked to it, though.

Hey,

I've got a piece that I'd like you to review. It's a short story.

Here's the link: topic46903.html

Thanks so much

There you go, Clever. Sorry I couldn't say more, but there wasn't much for me to critique.

Anyone else?

Hi~
Well, i dont write myself, nor have i posted any topics here,
but i was wondering if you would please review my sisters story
"Curumbasa::Island of secrets"
which can be found here:
topic47062.html

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