z

Young Writers Society


My Little Flare



User avatar
78 Reviews



Gender: Female
Points: 1854
Reviews: 78
Mon Jan 19, 2009 9:32 am
Theodorable says...



Okay, well I'm willing to review any type of poetry and short stories and chapters from a story(if need be). I'll try to be fair and I'll try my hardest to get to them quickly. ^.^ If you have any questions,just PM me.
Driver picks the music, shotgun shuts his cake hole. -Dean, Supernatural





User avatar
108 Reviews



Gender: Female
Points: 3129
Reviews: 108
Mon Jan 19, 2009 11:45 pm
KailaMarie says...



http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic42292.html

This is the first part of a three-part short story. I'd really appreciate a review. (:


Edit: I changed my mind. I have a lot of work to do on that. You can still review it if you want, but it's going to be changed a lot. Sorry!
... :D ...
[url]spottedturtle.tumblr.com[/url]





User avatar
42 Reviews



Gender: Female
Points: 1081
Reviews: 42
Wed Jan 21, 2009 4:44 am
Ducati says...



Since you asked for poetry, here you go!
post491731.html#491731
When you look at your life, in a strange new room, maybe drowning soon, is this the start of it all?





User avatar
78 Reviews



Gender: Female
Points: 1854
Reviews: 78
Thu Jan 22, 2009 5:12 pm
Theodorable says...



Okay, if anybody wants anytype of review I'm open for service. I really need to get some points.
Driver picks the music, shotgun shuts his cake hole. -Dean, Supernatural





User avatar
356 Reviews



Gender: Female
Points: 10701
Reviews: 356
Thu Jan 22, 2009 6:06 pm
*writewatiwant* says...



Hey there! Would you review my poem: I beg of you?
here's the link: topic42079.html
Thanks! :D

*Kat*
Piglet: How do you spell love?
Pooh: You don't spell it. You feel it.

The Buddy System Check us out!





User avatar
78 Reviews



Gender: Female
Points: 1854
Reviews: 78
Mon Jan 26, 2009 2:14 pm
Theodorable says...



Common people give me some stuff to review!
Driver picks the music, shotgun shuts his cake hole. -Dean, Supernatural





User avatar
51 Reviews



Gender: Female
Points: 890
Reviews: 51
Mon Jan 26, 2009 4:02 pm
*DaughteroftheMoon* says...



Okay, okay, so here is my poetry:

topic42712.html

Tear it apart, it needs it. Such a rough draft.

Thanks,
~Alyss
Amor Vincit Omnia





User avatar
216 Reviews



Gender: Female
Points: 9593
Reviews: 216
Wed Jan 28, 2009 3:49 am
asxz says...



Hello, Review please!

Prologue
Chapter 1 part 1
Chapter 1 part 2

Rip 'em to shreds and post A.S.A.P

Thank you so much, I desperately need to know if anyone likes it!!!
::XoX::KeepWriting::XoX::

GENERATION 29: The first time you see this, copy it into your sig on any forum and add 1 to the generation. Social experiment.

Writing is 3% talent and 97% not being distracted by the internet





User avatar
78 Reviews



Gender: Female
Points: 1854
Reviews: 78
Tue Feb 24, 2009 5:23 pm
Theodorable says...



Okay, someone give me something new!
Driver picks the music, shotgun shuts his cake hole. -Dean, Supernatural





User avatar
280 Reviews

Supporter


Gender: Female
Points: 794
Reviews: 280
Thu Feb 26, 2009 6:54 am
Nutty says...



topic44236.html

Short story. Be warned, I've been told it's a little disturbing.
It's not easy having a good time. Even smiling makes my face ache.





User avatar
324 Reviews



Gender: Female
Points: 15580
Reviews: 324
Thu Feb 26, 2009 11:16 pm
Threnody says...



Here's a nice short poem~
post514944.html#514944

It's called Coffee. The title's self explanatory

Thanks so much!!!

Peace, Love and Sugar Packets~
Forever Threnody
“One sees clearly only with the heart. Anything essential is invisible to the eyes”
~ The Little Prince~





User avatar
78 Reviews



Gender: Female
Points: 1854
Reviews: 78
Thu May 21, 2009 12:36 pm
Theodorable says...



I need something else to review! Give it to me!
Driver picks the music, shotgun shuts his cake hole. -Dean, Supernatural





User avatar
1087 Reviews



Gender: Female
Points: 44360
Reviews: 1087
Sat May 30, 2009 12:53 pm
Sins says...



Hey x
Could you please review the first chapter of my story? :)
Thanks in advance :D

Meg xoxo :wink:

topic48621.html
I didn't know what to put here so I put this.





User avatar
173 Reviews



Gender: Female
Points: 11035
Reviews: 173
Wed Jun 07, 2023 7:19 am
DreamyAlice says...



Hello, I am one of the res crew mods here on YWS. This is a message just to inform you that I will lock and archive this thread as it is not active anymore. We have to archive and lock the inactive threads to keep the forum organized so no worries, if you'd like to reopen it at any point in the future please contact a current resources moderator, we would be happy to reopen it for you ^-^

-ALICE
Imagination is a superpower. Use it well!








Sometimes I'm terrified of my heart; of its constant hunger for whatever it is it wants. The way it stops and starts.
— Poe